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can hurt two hearts and make them weep?
To share our lives was meant to be,
and I know that You agree
our hearts were made for each other.

My life without You is so wrong,
I need You back where You belong -
holding hearts and holding hands,
fulfilling each other’s love demands.
My heart lives only for You.

There is no life after a love so strong;
I'll always wonder where we went wrong.
Lying beside You and holding You tight
made everything wrong in the world seem right.
It's You, and only You, I need.

I know You're hurt and I know You're sad;
and even the angels above are mad
about the way You've been abused.
Honey You know you'll never be used
by me You're heart is safe.

When I made a commitment to Your heart
I vowed my love would never part.
I think about You in all that I do,
hoping that all of my dreams come true.
You're what my dreams are made of.

Darkhorse 71
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Vanquished Love

Contributed by darkhorse71 on Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 08:15:49 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



How can it be that a love so deep
can hurt two hearts and make them weep?
To share our lives was meant to be,
and I know that You agree
our hearts were made for each other.

My life without You is so wrong,
I need You back where You belong -
holding hearts and holding hands,
fulfilling each other’s love demands.
My heart lives only for You.

There is no life after a love so strong;
I'll always wonder where we went wrong.
Lying beside You and holding You tight
made everything wrong in the world seem right.
It's You, and only You, I need.

I know You're hurt and I know You're sad;
and even the angels above are mad
about the way You've been abused.
Honey You know you'll never be used
by me You're heart is safe.

When I made a commitment to Your heart
I vowed my love would never part.
I think about You in all that I do,
hoping that all of my dreams come true.
You're what my dreams are made of.

Darkhorse 71




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Re: Vanquished Love (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 08:19:10 PM AEST
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Very good poem! It's true that we can't control
love, it's the most unpredictable force in the
entire universe.

Keep writing!

-Butch
-The Betrayer of Hope


Re: Vanquished Love (User Rating: 1 )
by EmoDCgirl36 on Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 09:15:10 PM AEST
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Yes quite right. It's just what we need though. A little bit of a surprise never hurt anyone. This poem I think everyone should read because they will feel connected to it somehow. Maybe not for the love. But for the feelings that are read between the lines. I hope the best for you.


Re: Vanquished Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 11:15:25 PM AEST
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Wonderful Write John
such a sweet soul you have.. You deserve the very best
I hope your dream comes true..
Hugggggggggggggs
~~~Michelle~~~


Re: Vanquished Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 10:54:47 PM AEST
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I've read pretty much everyone of your poems, and everyone of them I love, there all so relatable, heartfelt, you're an excellent writter, good luck, and don't stop.




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