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Array ( [sid] => 104068 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Trail of Stars [time] => 2005-08-21 09:47:31 [hometext] => A fragment of sorts, as is most of my thoughts and works nowadays... a memory of a moment when I remember how it felt to be alive and how it was that you can feel you heart is about to leap out of your chest. How apt, the foolish memories of a fool. [bodytext] => There is a trail of stars that leads me here,
to this glorious place of happy summers.

For in thine eyes I see a spring,
the beginnings of love and better things.

Upon thy lips a smile the warmth of a thousand suns,
that even in winter climes keeps me warm and fine.

I want to dance and dance in the windy summer breeze,
so that I can become one with those that your tresses breathe.

I want to climb the clouds and be just like the rain,
so that I can fall upon and caress your lovely skin. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Baronhawk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

A Trail of Stars

Contributed by Baronhawk on Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 09:47:31 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

There is a trail of stars that leads me here,
to this glorious place of happy summers.

For in thine eyes I see a spring,
the beginnings of love and better things.

Upon thy lips a smile the warmth of a thousand suns,
that even in winter climes keeps me warm and fine.

I want to dance and dance in the windy summer breeze,
so that I can become one with those that your tresses breathe.

I want to climb the clouds and be just like the rain,
so that I can fall upon and caress your lovely skin.

Copyright © Baronhawk ... [ 2005-08-21 09:47:31]
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Re: A Trail of Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by maestar on Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 10:44:16 AM AEST
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I love this poem.

Great write, full of heart and soul

Re: A Trail of Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 10:00:56 PM AEST
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Beautiful words, no doubt about it. Foolish memories to a fool may be nearly indistinguishable from fond memories of a poet, so think on that possiblility.

Andrew

Re: A Trail of Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 10:25:37 PM AEST
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ah then I guess we are all fools.....

Your intro truely says it all and yet is hardly needed as this piece truely stands on its own.

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