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Array ( [sid] => 104035 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => wanting love [time] => 2005-08-20 22:10:09 [hometext] => This is my true life, true feelings and I just had to write them down to get it off my chest. [bodytext] => I waste my life waiting for you to love me.
Not just any kind of love,
but the kind that makes the world stop turning when you're with them kinda love.
I have that love for you.
I would give anything for that in return.
I can hear the voice in my head screaming out for you to love me.
"PLEASE LOVE ME! WHY DON'T YOU LOVE ME?"
All I hear is the echo screaming back.
I feel alone for the first time in my life.
I can see you lying next to me but are you really there?
Can you actually comprehend the things I say to you or do you even care to?
You brush off my cries as mood swings,
but they are real tears of hurt
tears of pain that you have caused me by being there,
but not really there at all.
Am I even making sense to you?
My mind gets so blurry along with my soaked eyes that I can't think straight.
I wish you would hold me,
make everything alright.
Make the echoes of pain go away and fill it with your voice,
"I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH IT HURTS!"
That's all I want to hear.
Will you give me that satisfaction?
One sentence of pleasure to calm my nerves and dry my eyes.
......I guess not...... [comments] => 5 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 2 [informant] => twobabies [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
wanting love

Contributed by twobabies on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 10:10:09 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I waste my life waiting for you to love me.
Not just any kind of love,
but the kind that makes the world stop turning when you're with them kinda love.
I have that love for you.
I would give anything for that in return.
I can hear the voice in my head screaming out for you to love me.
"PLEASE LOVE ME! WHY DON'T YOU LOVE ME?"
All I hear is the echo screaming back.
I feel alone for the first time in my life.
I can see you lying next to me but are you really there?
Can you actually comprehend the things I say to you or do you even care to?
You brush off my cries as mood swings,
but they are real tears of hurt
tears of pain that you have caused me by being there,
but not really there at all.
Am I even making sense to you?
My mind gets so blurry along with my soaked eyes that I can't think straight.
I wish you would hold me,
make everything alright.
Make the echoes of pain go away and fill it with your voice,
"I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH IT HURTS!"
That's all I want to hear.
Will you give me that satisfaction?
One sentence of pleasure to calm my nerves and dry my eyes.
......I guess not......




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Re: wanting love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 10:13:28 PM AEST
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A very good poem, struck me right in the heart.SLipSiX.


Re: wanting love (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 10:21:06 PM AEST
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wow... good write. it very deep and emotional. but, i know lots of people feel like this and know what it's like to love someone who doesn't love you back. it hurts, i know. but, from your weakness, you will gain strength. good write, keep it up!

sending lots of luck that it all turns out okay!
~sprints


Re: wanting love (User Rating: 1 )
by TheKid on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 11:21:36 PM AEST
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Dont we all want love??

Anyway good write, I really enjoyed this poem

I've seen a lot of good writes today.!


Re: wanting love (User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 06:58:13 PM AEST
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Your pain and heartache is felt within this poem.Give that person time and space,for if it's meant to be,their eyes will open, in time....Nice write!


Re: wanting love (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 05:07:11 AM AEST
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Sad poem, I felt like that for years, till I got devorced, brilliant poem all my feelings were there, so know how you felt. x




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