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Array ( [sid] => 104028 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Let Go [time] => 2005-08-20 20:38:41 [hometext] => I wrote this song last night, I love it and I can play it on my electric guitar. Please comment on it thankz! [bodytext] => I'm lying along the ocean, thinking of you. You're the only one who occupies my mind day and night. If only I could get over you, then who knows what could happen! The thought of your face holds me back so hard I forget to breathe. Chorus: When I'm around you, I don't remember to breathe' and when I talk to you, I forget to be truthful. I do it because I tried to please you, but it won't happen again" as long as I let you GO, I don't have to empty my mind around you.
end of Chorus;
Why must things be this way"? Only God knows; why must I be quiet every time I see you? I must listen to my heart; and let you Go! Everything is falling apart; you I can't come to. It's all your fault that this happened anyways; but I won't let you in ANYMORE, anymore.
Chorus: end of chorus
on and on and off and on and on and Aa'off!!!
Let you go, it's what I have to do; cause you messed me up, don't know how much you screwed it up; That's why I'll let you go... go and go, go go GO away and let you go 0o. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Mikayla [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Let Go

Contributed by Mikayla on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 08:38:41 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



I'm lying along the ocean, thinking of you. You're the only one who occupies my mind day and night. If only I could get over you, then who knows what could happen! The thought of your face holds me back so hard I forget to breathe. Chorus: When I'm around you, I don't remember to breathe' and when I talk to you, I forget to be truthful. I do it because I tried to please you, but it won't happen again" as long as I let you GO, I don't have to empty my mind around you.
end of Chorus;
Why must things be this way"? Only God knows; why must I be quiet every time I see you? I must listen to my heart; and let you Go! Everything is falling apart; you I can't come to. It's all your fault that this happened anyways; but I won't let you in ANYMORE, anymore.
Chorus: end of chorus
on and on and off and on and on and Aa'off!!!
Let you go, it's what I have to do; cause you messed me up, don't know how much you screwed it up; That's why I'll let you go... go and go, go go GO away and let you go 0o.




Copyright © Mikayla ... [ 2005-08-20 20:38:41]
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Re: Let Go (User Rating: 1 )
by twobabies on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 10:16:56 PM AEST
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I thought it was very good, kinda confusing, but good. If you love someone so much that you can't breathe why let them go? Unless you're afraid of suffication...I don't know...good song I would like to know the tune then it might make more sense to me.


Re: Let Go (User Rating: 1 )
by TheKid on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 11:22:39 PM AEST
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Wow another poem I can realte too!




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