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Array ( [sid] => 104001 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rose to Foe [time] => 2005-08-20 11:54:25 [hometext] => Comments are apprecaited on this one (good or bad) Thanks! [bodytext] => Goodbye my precious loving rose
You have grown into one of my evilest foes
I merely remain a vivid memory of your past
I quickly wonder why it could not last

What is this battle we are fighting?
Wish I could erase the pages and change it with my own clever writing
I’m through throwing punches, I’m sure I fought enough
Look into my eyes cant you see this is not a bluff

This could be a great mistake
One I wish I did not have to partake
But I can not live on with my heart in a million pieces
Day by day I pray the number of pieces gradually decreases

After all this time I realize I do not need you anymore
I have closed the drawer and slammed the door
You are permanently out of my mind
Sweep away the memories into a large bucket, as I close this chapter pulling down the everlasting blind

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Rose to Foe

Contributed by TheKid on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 11:54:25 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Goodbye my precious loving rose
You have grown into one of my evilest foes
I merely remain a vivid memory of your past
I quickly wonder why it could not last

What is this battle we are fighting?
Wish I could erase the pages and change it with my own clever writing
I’m through throwing punches, I’m sure I fought enough
Look into my eyes cant you see this is not a bluff

This could be a great mistake
One I wish I did not have to partake
But I can not live on with my heart in a million pieces
Day by day I pray the number of pieces gradually decreases

After all this time I realize I do not need you anymore
I have closed the drawer and slammed the door
You are permanently out of my mind
Sweep away the memories into a large bucket, as I close this chapter pulling down the everlasting blind

Copyright Â© TheKid ... [ 2005-08-20 11:54:25]
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Re: Rose to Foe (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 01:52:45 PM AEST
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This is a good poem, heartfelt, just remember the sites rules....it will help you have more comments!

Re: Rose to Foe (User Rating: 1 )
by maestar on Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 10:41:01 AM AEST
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Good poem.

liked the last line

Re: Rose to Foe (User Rating: 1 )
by Mikayla on Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 07:26:06 PM AEST
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Hey its me again
i really liked this poem
like i said in all the comments i love your form of poetry
please contact me soon!
great poem
im not just saying that! :)

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