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Array ( [sid] => 103951 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => disapear (part 2) [time] => 2005-08-19 18:20:17 [hometext] => i thought this needed more and then someones comment confermed it! so here it is! [bodytext] => it would be so much better with out you here
no one loves you no one cares
you know you want to just disappear
no one would notice
can you smell it the sweet smell of death
you are so close take an extra pill
guns are good too for that long time rest
but once your gone you can forget the cutting
forget beating yourself
once you are gone you can not come back to do it agian
so enjoy it make it good and last long so you will never forget it
make it painful so it can feel as good as it does thinking about it
no one loves you no one cares
you know you want to just disappear
death has come so say hello and goodbye to all you've known
the pain is deep its like everything you wanted the blood slithers down your throught
as you grow cold you start to remember the ones your leaving but it too late
going blind in the darkness of death but its so bright until you pass
all you see is what could have been a life of love and peace if you could have held on but
no one loved you no one cared
you just wanted to disappear
you got your wish life is now behind you and your in a darker place
past life past death lost in the black and grey of a another space
and now that your lifeout of reach you relize that hat was not the casethat
someone loved you some one cared
the'll never let you just disappear [comments] => 2 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 36 [informant] => russ-dawg [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
disapear (part 2)

Contributed by russ-dawg on Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 06:20:17 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



it would be so much better with out you here
no one loves you no one cares
you know you want to just disappear
no one would notice
can you smell it the sweet smell of death
you are so close take an extra pill
guns are good too for that long time rest
but once your gone you can forget the cutting
forget beating yourself
once you are gone you can not come back to do it agian
so enjoy it make it good and last long so you will never forget it
make it painful so it can feel as good as it does thinking about it
no one loves you no one cares
you know you want to just disappear
death has come so say hello and goodbye to all you've known
the pain is deep its like everything you wanted the blood slithers down your throught
as you grow cold you start to remember the ones your leaving but it too late
going blind in the darkness of death but its so bright until you pass
all you see is what could have been a life of love and peace if you could have held on but
no one loved you no one cared
you just wanted to disappear
you got your wish life is now behind you and your in a darker place
past life past death lost in the black and grey of a another space
and now that your lifeout of reach you relize that hat was not the casethat
someone loved you some one cared
the'll never let you just disappear




Copyright © russ-dawg ... [ 2005-08-19 18:20:17]
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Re: disapear (part 2) (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 07:43:39 PM AEST
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very sad and powerful and the end sealed the deal. You are loved and cared for always remember that

Michelle


Re: disapear (part 2) (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 01:50:42 AM AEST
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it was ok..
ya gotta get ya composition down..

build some stanzas..
get some rhythm goin'..

(use spell chk)

good luck-

B




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