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Array ( [sid] => 103918 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Next [time] => 2005-08-19 11:36:08 [hometext] => The events after death. [bodytext] => I close my eyes with no surprise
This is the end no faults to mend
And with no fear I know I'm here
In heaven where I should be.

But somehow this is not so fun as stories and books do tell
For I am grey and in dismay for others I know have fell
A loud shrill crack and suddenly I'm dropping dancing, swaying in the wind
With one loud smack i'm on the ground flowing in a river
I'm gone once more,
This is the end and now I'm forever shining.
For I am many different colours and for me men are mining [comments] => 9 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 21 [informant] => maestar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

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Contributed by maestar on Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 11:36:08 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I close my eyes with no surprise
This is the end no faults to mend
And with no fear I know I'm here
In heaven where I should be.

But somehow this is not so fun as stories and books do tell
For I am grey and in dismay for others I know have fell
A loud shrill crack and suddenly I'm dropping dancing, swaying in the wind
With one loud smack i'm on the ground flowing in a river
I'm gone once more,
This is the end and now I'm forever shining.
For I am many different colours and for me men are mining

Copyright © maestar ... [ 2005-08-19 11:36:08]
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Re: Next (User Rating: 1 )
by maestar on Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 12:34:55 PM AEST
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I loved this poem maestar, you are the rain and then you turn to a diamond! How poetic is that!! Well done and welcome to the site! Keep writing, I look forward to reading your next masterpiece!
xx

Re: Next (User Rating: 1 )
by Manda2 on Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 12:43:24 PM AEST
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Well done Maestar! A very good poem.
xxx

Re: Next (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 10:57:19 AM AEST
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Loved this poem , thanks for you comments on mine to..x

Re: Next (User Rating: 1 )
by maestar on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 11:07:57 AM AEST
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HI READERS.

LET ME EXPLAIN.

MY MUM WROTE A COMMENT FOR ME ON (NEXT) AND BY ACCIDENT IT LOOKS LIKE I WROTE IT AS I HADN'T LOGGED OUT ON THIS COMPUTER! MUMS EH?!!!

I'M NOT THAT BIG HEADED!

Re: Next (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 01:31:00 PM AEST
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Unique write. I consider myself worthy of diamonds, but never even considered being one. This is really one to ponder.

Rita

Re: Next (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 11:19:06 PM AEST
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Great poem. Youe transformation in the poem was quite compelling.

Re: Next (User Rating: 1 )
by kcampbell on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 10:06:48 AM AEST
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I really like the thought of turning into a diamond... Good write! : )

Re: Next (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 11:23:26 AM AEST
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This is very good. I like your simple style in this. Thanks for telling us about your Mom. I knew you was not conceited.

Re: Next (User Rating: 1 )
by Candice on Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 08:47:37 AM AEST
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I'm very prowd of you for that poem.
Your allready a little Jem Me deers!

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