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Array ( [sid] => 103835 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Alone in the Dark [time] => 2005-08-18 13:24:59 [hometext] => [bodytext] => alone in the dark
where no one can see
i waste away
a life melancholy

chained to my desk
i watch life pass me by
i'd tried but i'd failed
with others to fly

sweats torment each night
as i dream of one sweet
but the rem turns so bad
as i die at her feet

when nothing's left to say
having done all i can do
swan dive onto concrete
finally, the pain it is through [comments] => 3 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 36 [informant] => jaycee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Alone in the Dark

Contributed by jaycee on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 01:24:59 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

alone in the dark
where no one can see
i waste away
a life melancholy

chained to my desk
i watch life pass me by
i'd tried but i'd failed
with others to fly

sweats torment each night
as i dream of one sweet
but the rem turns so bad
as i die at her feet

when nothing's left to say
having done all i can do
swan dive onto concrete
finally, the pain it is through

Copyright Â© jaycee ... [ 2005-08-18 13:24:59]
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Re: Alone in the Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 01:40:01 PM AEST
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Jaycee

this poem worried me and i hope you know how wonderful you really are with so much to offer and so much to live for . please know you always have a friend here , and please love yourself , you are beautiful and unique and are a child of God or (HP)
Kara

Re: Alone in the Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 08:34:41 PM AEST
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Kara is right, Jaycee... You have so much to live for and to offer...... It doesn't have to be this way.... YOU can change it....
Think about that.....
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Alone in the Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 09:16:14 AM AEST
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OMG, an average score of 1??? I'm tempted to create an account and give it a vote of 3, to bring the avg. to 2, lol. Wow, someone hated it that much to give it a 1. I'm sooooo glad that my life is so distasteful that somone has to give it a 1. Probably some rich, iced latté drinking snob who never had to struggle for anything...

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