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Array ( [sid] => 103798 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => * Us* [time] => 2005-08-18 01:22:26 [hometext] => This is my first posted poem that i wrote a while back, but it comes from my heart, just as all writings should. please comment.( good or bad) :) criticism helps! [bodytext] => The way you make me feel, I can't even explain

All day and all night, you make my heart go insane

All the late nights, we satyed up together

When I felt bad, you made me feel better

Your not ashamed of me, nor am I ashamed of you

We're just two young lovers, in a world with no clue

Soon you'll go of, and leave me all alone

We'll only talk once a week,Unfortunaely, by telephone

Then it goes to once a month, and eventually, we'll drift apart

We will have our seperate worlds, but you'll always have my heart [comments] => 4 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 2 [informant] => shae [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

* Us*

Contributed by shae on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 01:22:26 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The way you make me feel, I can't even explain

All day and all night, you make my heart go insane

All the late nights, we satyed up together

When I felt bad, you made me feel better

Your not ashamed of me, nor am I ashamed of you

We're just two young lovers, in a world with no clue

Soon you'll go of, and leave me all alone

We'll only talk once a week,Unfortunaely, by telephone

Then it goes to once a month, and eventually, we'll drift apart

We will have our seperate worlds, but you'll always have my heart

Copyright © shae ... [ 2005-08-18 01:22:26]
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Re: * Us* (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 01:28:25 AM AEST
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so sweet makes me sad :( . Good writing though

Re: * Us* (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 02:42:06 AM AEST
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I agree sad but beautifully written.
huggs,
emy

Re: * Us* (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 04:49:33 AM AEST
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Smoothly written! Undeniably sad, though.
Yes, it's hard when you drift away from the
person that you love. The painful thing about
it is the way you slowly drift apart. It's like
savouring the pain.

Keep writing!

-Butch
-The Betrayer of Hope

Re: * Us* (User Rating: 1 )
by JenJen on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 11:19:29 AM AEST
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an brilliant write well done
i hope this special perosn knows how you feel about them, you never know theymight feel the same about you too!
All my love, hope and wishes
Jenny
xxx

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