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[title] => Broken King
[time] => 2005-08-17 21:43:36
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[bodytext] => I first laid eyes on you by the pool Trying my best not to look like a fool Water splashing and volleyballs in the air Asking you to join me I nervously declared To my surprise she said yes in a loving tone We had a marvelous time as I told her I would call her later on the phone Waiting impatiently too call her I grew extremely scared Blood rushing, I dialed her digits, I wasn’t prepared She answered on the fourth ring My heart felt an ultimate sting We made plans for the night This vacation so far was turning out to be a great delight I slowly walked to the arcade where we were to meet Outside rain was poring down, Mother Nature I needed to defeat I gently opened the arcade door Oddly I wasn’t feeling scared anymore We sat down and relaxed by a white table I couldn’t believe my luck almost like an unbelievable fable We talked for hours It seemed as tough it was raining flowers It turned 12 AM rather fast Today was a definite blast I said goodnight as I gave her a warm hug This natural high of love was better than any other drug I walked back to my room, how could she make me feel this way? She makes me feel as if all my troubles have gone away That cold night I could not sleep for my mind was racing with emotions My heart felt strong like surfing on the waves of the ocean The next morning I wondered if I would see her again But if I did not I wasn’t going to complain The day slowly dragged on And on I was growing impatient as I released a yawn I suck up enough courage to give her a call She did not answer; I had taken my first fall I waited another hour before trying again I was becoming insane One finger at a time I pressed the numbers on the phone I had gotten into the perfect mental zone To my surprise she was there As if answered was my prayer We would meet on the boardwalk I left the room to meet her quicker than a hawk She was sitting in the arcade Feeling just a bit afraid I wanted to win her a prize And give it to her as a surprise I saw the perfect game If I lost I would have felt bitter shame It was me versus the claw I lowered the claw; it looked like a winner I was in awe Sadly, the prizes fell I wasn’t feeling very swell But as she grabbed me close God only knows I felt like a king And she was my ring We made our way back to the hotel Getting ready to say tonight’s farewell It suddenly started to rain Silent we remained We lost control and jumped into the pool I realized I had found my precious jewel We left the pool to sit in the hot tub She gave me a gentle back rub I asked her what the craziest thing she had done She said this moment was; she described it being her greatest “fun” Finally we said goodnight, so bad did I want to go in for a kiss If I got rejected my heart would have fallen into an abyss I decided tonight was not the right point, I was being too naive So, I would ask for it tomorrow before I would leave But only if I knew how this king would fall I would have exchanged it for a major brawl How could I have known that I wouldn’t get a chance to say goodbye? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 283 [topic] => 22 [informant] => TheKid [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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