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Array ( [sid] => 103761 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Under My Hat [time] => 2005-08-17 20:42:54 [hometext] => some thoughts on life and such [bodytext] => Under my hat
I have thoughts
Things kept to me
Things that scare me
Things that drive me
Untold things
Unreal things
Every moment is a question
Every thought an puzzle
Red splashes
and car crashes
As the mind smashes
And thoughts clash
Been told I am not so sane
But what is sane?
Is it swallowing the tripe
Our society spews upon us?
How can that be sanity
It's full of disdain and hate
Sex and darkness
All for the mighty gold coin
So that we might
Buy some other useless toy
Grappling with the darkness
The blood
The hate
The unruly
Thoughts
It all haunts
And twists
And hits deep
What will this reap

STR
3-5-05
7:54pm
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 21 [informant] => arakrune [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Under My Hat

Contributed by arakrune on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 08:42:54 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Under my hat
I have thoughts
Things kept to me
Things that scare me
Things that drive me
Untold things
Unreal things
Every moment is a question
Every thought an puzzle
Red splashes
and car crashes
As the mind smashes
And thoughts clash
Been told I am not so sane
But what is sane?
Is it swallowing the tripe
Our society spews upon us?
How can that be sanity
It's full of disdain and hate
Sex and darkness
All for the mighty gold coin
So that we might
Buy some other useless toy
Grappling with the darkness
The blood
The hate
The unruly
Thoughts
It all haunts
And twists
And hits deep
What will this reap

STR
3-5-05
7:54pm

Copyright © arakrune ... [ 2005-08-17 20:42:54]
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Re: Under My Hat (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 09:07:26 PM AEST
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A very good poem, I liked it.

Re: Under My Hat (User Rating: 1 )
by evilfairy on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 03:48:05 AM AEST
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ah - that's quite good.
i like the whole
" Red splashes
and car crashes
As the mind smashes "

thing...it's like punches in the face...if that makes sense...?? probably not...lol

Re: Under My Hat (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 01:09:29 AM AEST
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** But what is sane?
Is it swallowing the tripe
Our society spews upon us?

Wonderful topic for poem write, provides clear complete contact with the reader.

I liked how you told what was under your hat, then asked the question.

Raquel Leah :D

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