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Unchanging in my mind. The depression; it's there inside.
In -
Coherent are my thoughts. Soon you will find me
In
Death. . .my
Epitaph

~Kortnie~ [comments] => 7 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 36 [informant] => justme03 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

SUICIDE

Contributed by justme03 on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 06:03:13 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Something is
Unchanging in my mind. The depression; it's there inside.
In -
Coherent are my thoughts. Soon you will find me
In
Death. . .my
Epitaph

~Kortnie~

Copyright © justme03 ... [ 2005-08-17 18:03:13]
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Re: SUICIDE (User Rating: 1 )
by all_that_i_can_be on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 07:18:38 PM AEST
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short. but very well put. amazing poem.

Re: SUICIDE (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 08:56:10 PM AEST
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strong write. nicely done. chin up!

Re: SUICIDE (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenandinlove16 on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 12:14:15 AM AEST
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though most poems are merely feeling not really to be takein seriously... if you are serious about suicide... trust me its not worth it...ive tried one to many time to kill myself... and i never succeed... i think God has bigger plans than we think... Keep your head up and if you need a friend Private Message me!!...
-Much love- your friend from a far

*many hugs* -Amber

Re: SUICIDE (User Rating: 1 )
by colinbaker62 on Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 11:08:11 AM AEST
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Kortnie this is wonderful. A very cleverly written acrostic me thinks..

At first, i thought it was a ting twoster but as I read on, it all became as clear as mud. lol

Colin

Re: SUICIDE (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 05:13:35 PM AEST
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Scary poem because i hope you do not kill yourself. This was a hood write to get your feelings out.

Re: SUICIDE (User Rating: 1 )
by JenJen on Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 03:57:06 PM AEST
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short but to the point and u no im very blonde nd dnt understand most things so i read it 4 a second time nd found the word *gives self pat on the back* lol
very gd again if u ever need 2 tlk im here
luv
jenni
xxx

Re: SUICIDE (User Rating: 1 )
by outlaw_mutiny on Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 10:38:23 AM AEST
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I DISAGREE WITH EVERYONE IF YOU WANNA KILL YOURSELF HAVE A BLAST GO WITH YOUR GUT JUST DO IT NICE WRITE

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