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Array ( [sid] => 103695 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A loss forgotten [time] => 2005-08-17 01:22:15 [hometext] => Any comments and feedback is appreciated. [bodytext] => I have lived a thousand lives
All withen my head.
Took for granted happiness
leaving everything left unsaid.

Forgot to watch the moon
As it soared above the stars.
Never knew the sun set so soon
From self imposed prison walls.

Now my hell has settled in
Thriving off my black heart.
Eating away my sanity
The only thing left to part.

Years go bye in the blink of an eye
Leaving insecurities to search for truth.
Lies steal away the sighs
of lonely forgotten dreams.

Take a look into the mirror
and Tell me what you see.
Vacent eyes holding on to
everything I can never be.
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Pray4Peace [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 21 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

A loss forgotten

Contributed by Pray4Peace on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 01:22:15 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

I have lived a thousand lives
All withen my head.
Took for granted happiness
leaving everything left unsaid.

Forgot to watch the moon
As it soared above the stars.
Never knew the sun set so soon
From self imposed prison walls.

Now my hell has settled in
Thriving off my black heart.
Eating away my sanity
The only thing left to part.

Years go bye in the blink of an eye
Leaving insecurities to search for truth.
Lies steal away the sighs
of lonely forgotten dreams.

Take a look into the mirror
and Tell me what you see.
Vacent eyes holding on to
everything I can never be.

Copyright © Pray4Peace ... [ 2005-08-17 01:22:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A loss forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 01:31:40 AM AEST
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years flew by .. and so many words went un-said.. so many things went un-done.. you're right..
mary
oh .. great write..

Re: A loss forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by Ineedanap on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 01:50:57 AM AEST
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Powerful. You truly display an image of a tormented soul. Great write. I absolutely loved it

Re: A loss forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 04:16:26 AM AEST
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A really good first submission. Aside from a few misspelled words (I'm the pot, you're the kettle), and the meter not being exact, it was really good. You created great imagery, letting us see a view from your eye.
Well done.
Take care.
David

Re: A loss forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 04:16:26 AM AEST
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powerful write. Keep writing

Re: A loss forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 02:52:44 AM AEST
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I got a lot out of this write and it looks like it is your first on YPDC Oh well done!!!....congratulations Pray4Peace
coni

Re: A loss forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 02:48:04 AM AEST
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very good

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