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Array ( [sid] => 103692 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cardiac Cell Striations [time] => 2005-08-17 00:54:40 [hometext] => This poem was an assignment for a class I took last semester. This is the revised version of the original and I actually really like this poem even though I had no clue what I was putting down on my paper. Full of angsty goodness!!!! [bodytext] => Your callused hands scribble iconic hearts
across my stomach as they travel
d
o
w
n
towards my jeans, stopping above
the waistline.
I
love
you
flows like Pennzoil
from your lips as you
fasten your hooks around my belt loops,
thumbs fiddling with the button.
You’re so romantic.
I breathe counterfeit exultations
d
o
w
n
your neck, encouraging you to continue
your quest. Fabric sliding, hands meandering, hips bucking
while I dig perfectly manicured fingernails
into your back.
Motions are rehearsed,
repeated,
rendered void.
I’ll lie here tonight,
convince myself you’re just another easy
*****,
and imagine that you are someone I could truly love: a musician, an artist, or
your brother.
Anyone but you…
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 71 [informant] => blueteelah [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => secrets )

Cardiac Cell Striations

Contributed by blueteelah on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 12:54:40 AM in AEST
Topic: secrets

Your callused hands scribble iconic hearts
across my stomach as they travel
d
o
w
n
towards my jeans, stopping above
the waistline.
I
love
you
flows like Pennzoil
from your lips as you
fasten your hooks around my belt loops,
thumbs fiddling with the button.
You’re so romantic.
I breathe counterfeit exultations
d
o
w
n
your neck, encouraging you to continue
your quest. Fabric sliding, hands meandering, hips bucking
while I dig perfectly manicured fingernails
into your back.
Motions are rehearsed,
repeated,
rendered void.
I’ll lie here tonight,
convince myself you’re just another easy
*****,
and imagine that you are someone I could truly love: a musician, an artist, or
your brother.
Anyone but you…

Copyright Â© blueteelah ... [ 2005-08-17 00:54:40]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Cardiac Cell Striations (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 01:01:17 AM AEST
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I love this poem, I took Anatomy and Phys. 1 and 2 and just think this is great sexy and clever ,

Leia36

Re: Cardiac Cell Striations (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 01:34:38 AM AEST
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ditto to the above ..

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