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Array ( [sid] => 10367 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => DARK SOUL [time] => 2003-01-14 10:00:00 [hometext] => Depressed as usual, but this is soo 90's [bodytext] => In my minds eye I have seen the darkness

that consumes my soul. unbound to death

and despair, I search for a sign of hope in my

world of blue. Love matters not to one who

blocks the path to it. My essence, perplexed

in reality and beyond that of the norm.

Tempermental and timid is my heart, stoned

yet weak. It's not easy to see things as they

truly are. Unprepared for the homecoming I

travel, it's easy to be decieved of safety.

Undertaking the path may lead to my

undoing.

The treasures I have taken are not my to own

but mine to protect. I know some consider

me mad and that is bad judgement from bad

people. Blind by my own inhibitions, I look

on in wonderment. My conscience feeds my

dark soul, my heart locked away.

If I go, I will not be mourned. If I stay, I will go

mad. My confusion causes chaos within

me. Am I born yet or am I alive?

Dead, gone, or hiding. I want to be whatever

Iam destined to be and more.
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DARK SOUL

Contributed by darkkai on Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

In my minds eye I have seen the darkness

that consumes my soul. unbound to death

and despair, I search for a sign of hope in my

world of blue. Love matters not to one who

blocks the path to it. My essence, perplexed

in reality and beyond that of the norm.

Tempermental and timid is my heart, stoned

yet weak. It's not easy to see things as they

truly are. Unprepared for the homecoming I

travel, it's easy to be decieved of safety.

Undertaking the path may lead to my

undoing.

The treasures I have taken are not my to own

but mine to protect. I know some consider

me mad and that is bad judgement from bad

people. Blind by my own inhibitions, I look

on in wonderment. My conscience feeds my

dark soul, my heart locked away.

If I go, I will not be mourned. If I stay, I will go

mad. My confusion causes chaos within

me. Am I born yet or am I alive?

Dead, gone, or hiding. I want to be whatever

Iam destined to be and more.

Copyright © darkkai ... [ 2003-01-14 10:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: DARK SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 10:07:52 AM AEST
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Oooo i like this one alot....My conscience feeds my dark soul....i love that line...this is a beautiful write and sooo dark and yes you are right soo 90's hehe...keep writing my friend.....
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Re: DARK SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by SilverMercury on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 08:21:33 PM AEST
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ah yes, dark souls. I love them. :D

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