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Array ( [sid] => 103639 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => lustful ramblings [time] => 2005-08-16 10:55:27 [hometext] => I want him close to me..i want him back...now that we're at peace after war....but will he want me too...? I'm too afraid to ask..(this is ramblings...poured out but may not make sense..still working on it) [bodytext] => Your words are carried toward me with the cold breeze,
As your dark clouds return over the horizon,

Yet as distance closes in, you are whiter,

Purer, more peaceful, in such splendor,

I remember you. You died to me,

Returning now on the wind, you are,

Like a musical note you attach yourself in my mind,

No, not again, get out, please,

No more hurt, yet how it doesn't,

My heart throbs in the thoughts,

I smile at every one, such happiness again,

but such fear of falsehood and lies, once more,

Yet how your greyness has faded,

Showing no more storms or rain,

I wish for you to be alone too, yet I'm unsure,

Those dreams return, dreams of wonderful bliss,

All new tortures, in a new morning,

As I wake to wish out of reality,

Lay with me please, don't face away,

Stop living in my head, come to life,

be real, lay with me,

Such dreams and fantasies,

ready to be crushed with your simplistic words,

please don't hurt, just lay,

such anticipation I feel, wanting you, craving you,

feeling your breathe approaching,

Please touch me, feel me, stroke me,

touch my neck with your breathe,

I'm loving you in my mind, i cannot stop,

such visions you can break, I must stop,

But no, it stays the sun's presence,

Then hands to the moon, so dreamy,

Tired eyes, and mind, yet you play such beautiful music,

It enchants me and I listen,

I tell myself no, my mind decieves me,

Such dreams, let me die to dream them forever,

You're in every night now, please come to me,

Please, come lay with me now, and let it be as it were.
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lustful ramblings

Contributed by nomie on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 10:55:27 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



Your words are carried toward me with the cold breeze,
As your dark clouds return over the horizon,

Yet as distance closes in, you are whiter,

Purer, more peaceful, in such splendor,

I remember you. You died to me,

Returning now on the wind, you are,

Like a musical note you attach yourself in my mind,

No, not again, get out, please,

No more hurt, yet how it doesn't,

My heart throbs in the thoughts,

I smile at every one, such happiness again,

but such fear of falsehood and lies, once more,

Yet how your greyness has faded,

Showing no more storms or rain,

I wish for you to be alone too, yet I'm unsure,

Those dreams return, dreams of wonderful bliss,

All new tortures, in a new morning,

As I wake to wish out of reality,

Lay with me please, don't face away,

Stop living in my head, come to life,

be real, lay with me,

Such dreams and fantasies,

ready to be crushed with your simplistic words,

please don't hurt, just lay,

such anticipation I feel, wanting you, craving you,

feeling your breathe approaching,

Please touch me, feel me, stroke me,

touch my neck with your breathe,

I'm loving you in my mind, i cannot stop,

such visions you can break, I must stop,

But no, it stays the sun's presence,

Then hands to the moon, so dreamy,

Tired eyes, and mind, yet you play such beautiful music,

It enchants me and I listen,

I tell myself no, my mind decieves me,

Such dreams, let me die to dream them forever,

You're in every night now, please come to me,

Please, come lay with me now, and let it be as it were.




Copyright © nomie ... [ 2005-08-16 10:55:27]
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Re: lustful ramblings (User Rating: 1 )
by ChromePlatedHrt on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 01:57:11 PM AEST
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Let me just say...I've been there.


Re: lustful ramblings (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 04:09:07 PM AEST
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Sad but a good write.
I pray the happiness you once had will return again..
God Bless!




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