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Array ( [sid] => 103603 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Righteous Beating [time] => 2005-08-16 00:11:01 [hometext] => this is really old.......sorry......it was my very 1st poem like, 2 years ago.....its gay [bodytext] => All I want to see is red
As decaying thoughts fill my head
You've never listened to a word I said
Through my cuts I will have bled

With hate filled fury
You admit to nothing
What to do now
You want to start something

Killing me from the inside
You felt no pain
It's all your fault
No remorse no shame

Unleashed my fury
Your blood is now spilled
The gleaming light leaves your eyes
This is why I've killed

I bathe in your blood
This time it's for real
Washing away my sins
Your fate I have sealed [comments] => 1 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 13 [informant] => alexb [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Righteous Beating

Contributed by alexb on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 12:11:01 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

All I want to see is red
As decaying thoughts fill my head
You've never listened to a word I said
Through my cuts I will have bled

With hate filled fury
You admit to nothing
What to do now
You want to start something

Killing me from the inside
You felt no pain
It's all your fault
No remorse no shame

Unleashed my fury
Your blood is now spilled
The gleaming light leaves your eyes
This is why I've killed

I bathe in your blood
This time it's for real
Washing away my sins
Your fate I have sealed

Copyright © alexb ... [ 2005-08-16 00:11:01]
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Re: Righteous Beating (User Rating: 1 )
by tin on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 12:52:32 AM AEST
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it's not gay, i liked it anyway. if you want to read some crap poetry then check out my first poem, it's about how i fell in love with my dentist, i then conjured up this poem and recited it to her while she was pulling my tooth(yeah i had a lot of novacaine).

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