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Signatures By
The Tired Lion

Warm yourself by the fire
Have a drink from the well,
So, you think that you're lost
Welcome to my feverish hell..

~*~

Screams the eclipse of the sun
Oh, butterflies to surely blame,
Blackest Dragons on the run
Windy creatures in the flames.

~*~

Voices of living tree trunks
My mind wood deep within',
Candle flames plzstop moving
Snowflakes now are bloomin'.

~*~

Distant graveyard on the hill
Blackberry groves now bare,
If my mind was not delutional
Would be with you not in here.

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Naked Coco Pops

Contributed by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 07:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Signatures By
The Tired Lion

Warm yourself by the fire
Have a drink from the well,
So, you think that you're lost
Welcome to my feverish hell..

~*~

Screams the eclipse of the sun
Oh, butterflies to surely blame,
Blackest Dragons on the run
Windy creatures in the flames.

~*~

Voices of living tree trunks
My mind wood deep within',
Candle flames plzstop moving
Snowflakes now are bloomin'.

~*~

Distant graveyard on the hill
Blackberry groves now bare,
If my mind was not delutional
Would be with you not in here.

Copyright © ladyfawn ... [ 2003-01-14 07:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Naked Coco Pops (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 08:46:01 AM AEST
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i loved this one girl ...thanks for sharing

Shari

Re: Naked Coco Pops (User Rating: 1 )
by roisin on Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 10:00:30 AM AEST
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words, words, words, they become such an addiction...i, as you, feel the need and the desire to write...it is a constant in my life...great visual write, enjoyed reading it..
ta... rosie....and i do hope you are better soon....ginger tea always so soothing when i'm down with a bug.....

Re: Naked Coco Pops (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 06:36:44 PM AEST
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well written,,your friend in words,,spooky

Re: Naked Coco Pops (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 06:40:46 PM AEST
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Nice... interesting title too... :D

Re: Naked Coco Pops (User Rating: 1 )
by princesspurty on Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 08:44:06 PM AEST
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ease up girl, it will all be clear in a day or too, hope your better soon, great poem, get some rest and plenty of soup! luvs ya!

Re: Naked Coco Pops (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 01:50:20 AM AEST
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Delutional !!! ahhhha..very good write..your venkat

Re: Naked Coco Pops (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 11:41:23 AM AEST
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undressed breakfast cereals, snappy and crackling, weird thoughts apoppin, time for more vitties dearie

Re: Naked Coco Pops (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 01:32:01 AM AEST
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I loved this ..reminds me of an abstract painting... :) Fevers gone now but staring at screen disease still lingers huh? lmao. ;) loves ya..

Re: Naked Coco Pops (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 10:55:00 PM AEST
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WOWIE!!!!!!! Nessa, this was an excellent read. One of these days, I'll be able to write something like this. *S* cynthia

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