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Array ( [sid] => 103597 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tremor of Fear [time] => 2005-08-15 22:45:13 [hometext] => a different veiw on hate [bodytext] => hiding in empty shadows
is what you fear most
it will take you in its mouth
it will tear you apart
freeze your soul
your heart will stop
as it overtakes your body
you can try to scream
noone would hear you
you are rendered powerless
against this beast in the dark
you shake and tremble
almost to the point of insanity
wincing at the sight of your own blood
pouring into puddles at your feet
try and get away, just try
before you life is completely drained
you take your last breath
then lie motionless
eyes wide open
the beast releases you and moves on
the beast was your own hatred
scared? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 13 [informant] => daydreamer22 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Tremor of Fear

Contributed by daydreamer22 on Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 10:45:13 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

hiding in empty shadows
is what you fear most
it will take you in its mouth
it will tear you apart
freeze your soul
your heart will stop
as it overtakes your body
you can try to scream
noone would hear you
you are rendered powerless
against this beast in the dark
you shake and tremble
almost to the point of insanity
wincing at the sight of your own blood
pouring into puddles at your feet
try and get away, just try
before you life is completely drained
you take your last breath
then lie motionless
eyes wide open
the beast releases you and moves on
the beast was your own hatred
scared?

Copyright © daydreamer22 ... [ 2005-08-15 22:45:13]
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Re: Tremor of Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by jeza on Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 10:56:08 PM AEST
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this poem is an interesting one .....
i liked it as it provide a completely different view on hate. i am very sick of everyone acting like they are the only ones in the world who don't hate this is a beautiful poem playing on what humans hate and fear most..... themselves

good luck with future poetry

Jeza

Re: Tremor of Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by jeza on Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 10:57:39 PM AEST
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this poem is an interesting one .....
i liked it as it provide a completely different
view on hate. i am very sick of everyone
acting like they are the only ones in the world
who don't hate this is a beautiful poem
playing on what humans hate and fear
most..... themselves

good luck with future poetry

Jeza

Re: Tremor of Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by Darkhorse71 on Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 11:09:21 PM AEST
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Excellent poem daydreamer, if hatred is that intense (which it is) then just think how powerful Love is.

john

Re: Tremor of Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 12:03:15 AM AEST
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ohhhhhhhhhh i loved the twist at the end.....is a touch scary yes lol....

written with style....very effective and dark indeed....

masterpiece!

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