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[aid] => mick
[title] => Broken 4 ever
[time] => 2005-08-15 18:51:38
[hometext] => please comment I wrote this from my heart after watching this sad movie. but now i hope i can give you guys an understanding on what its like to be a broken women or girl.
[bodytext] => It's late a night and another pretty women has been beat black and blue. her children shed tears of pain as they witness their mother be beat. as the sun begins to rise the young mother realizes she has no escape. And forbids herself to bring another child into a world of pain and hate. She looks over to the man she fell inlove with... but all she see's is the beast. the beast who beats her, lays her down and Rapes her She looks at the door and decides to rise up early. She go's to her 2 beautiful children's room. for she is truely thankful she has them. for they are her strength that gets her through the day. so she returns to the beasts room. And lays down waiting. Wating for him to awake. but as she lays she bumps him by mistake. he moves and looks at her. she prays under her breath for him to leave the children at peace. And not to beat her she lays still he jumps up ...... looks at her with a grin. And then jumps on her holding her down he starts to kiss her collar bone she just lays there motion less. then he start to undress her baring all. his grin grows wider. as she begs him not to. he tells to shut up so she did so As he begins to undress himself. her eyes pleading still. He smiles and then she tries to keep quiet but the pain is to much. he smiles big she begins to cry then he says your mine She then mutters No I'm NOT! and begins to scream awakin' the children one hits the beast and he calapes she gets up and runs telling her babies toget in the car . the oldest says are you ok she looks at him after there at a gas station and says yes now i'am. then she holds her stomach and says we're ok never again did she see him again. nor the kids. now this broken women has a house is a doctor for broken women and children she has twins and is remairried. Expecting but is happy for once she no longer rises with tears but rises singing [comments] => 2 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Butterfly_of_Passion [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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