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Array ( [sid] => 103506 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forbidden Love [time] => 2005-08-14 20:34:18 [hometext] => My bestfriend and I were never just friends...we thought we would be better off apart...until one night after two months of silence when i found myself right back to our old habits. And we thought we could hide this from everyone else.... [bodytext] => My life was falling apart, Silence pulled it back together
I pulled the shards of our relationship, From my heart straight to the gutter

Our lack of words was deafening, My lack of trust shown strong
Your name stung my throat like needles, Tasting bitter from that day on

But you know as well as I, That two people like us cannot stand to be apart
And so, no matter how we tried, You stole my happiness, you had my heart

Two month had passed, I was hardly fine, You were happier than ever with her
We spoke two words, I wouldn't consider kind, And behind closed doors, I was straight back into the arms of my forbidden lover

This game is cruel and so confusing, I know you better than anyone else
Yet I can't understand our chemistry, Or the way your words can make me melt

Your the closest stranger i've ever held, Your whisper echoes in my ears
Now that our secret is out my love, I find I can't hold back the tears
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Forbidden Love

Contributed by c2b6s on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 08:34:18 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished



My life was falling apart, Silence pulled it back together
I pulled the shards of our relationship, From my heart straight to the gutter

Our lack of words was deafening, My lack of trust shown strong
Your name stung my throat like needles, Tasting bitter from that day on

But you know as well as I, That two people like us cannot stand to be apart
And so, no matter how we tried, You stole my happiness, you had my heart

Two month had passed, I was hardly fine, You were happier than ever with her
We spoke two words, I wouldn't consider kind, And behind closed doors, I was straight back into the arms of my forbidden lover

This game is cruel and so confusing, I know you better than anyone else
Yet I can't understand our chemistry, Or the way your words can make me melt

Your the closest stranger i've ever held, Your whisper echoes in my ears
Now that our secret is out my love, I find I can't hold back the tears




Copyright © c2b6s ... [ 2005-08-14 20:34:18]
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Re: Forbidden Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Sahara on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 09:10:40 PM AEST
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Beautifully said, a sad write, with happiness protrayed in the end. Excellent job.


Re: Forbidden Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Nita on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 09:48:22 PM AEST
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So sad and very touching. Yes I've felt the sting of forbidden love before. Some scars never fully fade. I do hope things get better for you. Best wishes, Nita


Re: Forbidden Love (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:50:08 PM AEST
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I know the feeling of falling in love
with your best friend. I'm currently
experiencing the same dilemma.
Thanks for sharing this poem. It was
very well written. Try to look at my poem
entitled "Just a Friend", maybe you'll be
able to relate with it too.

Keep writing.

-Butch


Re: Forbidden Love (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 11:09:29 PM AEST
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yes ...love is cruel and confusing .. I agree.


Re: Forbidden Love (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 11:59:30 PM AEST
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your poem brought back memories of my love that ended a year ago. i realized how much i missed him. thank you for the memory boost.
great write
tasha


Re: Forbidden Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 12:01:10 AM AEST
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this is brilliant. very impressive bit. you are very talented, thats clearly obvious.


Re: Forbidden Love (User Rating: 1 )
by wikedladi on Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 03:56:57 AM AEST
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WOnderful write! A+ hope it gets better for you! : )




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