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Array ( [sid] => 103461 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Save Me [time] => 2005-08-14 04:54:21 [hometext] => Another random one.. You should be used to this by now. [bodytext] => I gave you my trust

Even though it was covered in rust

It hasn’t been used in so long

What did I do that was so wrong?



With you, I fell in love

Thought you were as pure as a dove

But after I had played my part

You decided to just break my heart



My mind is now lost

So much of my life you’ve cost

I just want a run away

And learn to love some other day



These scars I have won't ever heal

These cuts show the pain I feel is real

Save me from people who think they know me.

But mostly, save me from what I don’t want to be

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Save Me

Contributed by sylviawalters on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 04:54:21 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I gave you my trust

Even though it was covered in rust

It hasn’t been used in so long

What did I do that was so wrong?



With you, I fell in love

Thought you were as pure as a dove

But after I had played my part

You decided to just break my heart



My mind is now lost

So much of my life you’ve cost

I just want a run away

And learn to love some other day



These scars I have won't ever heal

These cuts show the pain I feel is real

Save me from people who think they know me.

But mostly, save me from what I don’t want to be





Copyright © sylviawalters ... [ 2005-08-14 04:54:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Zandria on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 05:17:19 AM AEST
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Maybe it's the weather...
This one left me a bit angry at the end.
Chin up.


Re: Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Darkhorse71 on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:28:19 AM AEST
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Unfortunately I can feel every line of this one. Hang in there - Great poem.


Re: Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyLikeAtTimes on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 01:31:14 PM AEST
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Great write, touching on many levels. Remember it will get better.

Lady


Re: Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Adrianna on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 01:59:23 PM AEST
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It touched me so much and almost made me cry.




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