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Array ( [sid] => 103438 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Gone [time] => 2005-08-13 23:11:41 [hometext] => I can be very deep.....can't i? I wrote this one after my boyfriend moved away. if u read [bodytext] => Holding on to nothing more
Your love has left me cold and sour.
Screaming for one last night
Not going down without a fight
Holding me close, tears in your eyes
Tomorrow is our last good-byes
Lost in your words, Caught in your name
I can never feel the same.
You said the words, and grabed my hand
Lifted me up and made me stand
I think of you, and i fall apart
I love you with all my heart
Can't you hear my heart screaming your name
Without your love, i'm not the same
Without your voice, i die inside
No longer your arm is where i can hide
Fearing the morning when u will be gone
Fearing the the words so long
One last kiss, and then I'll leave
We'll meet again, is what I believe
But believe in something that won't come true
I promice my heart, I'll forever love you. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 289 [topic] => 2 [informant] => dark_fighter_chick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Gone

Contributed by dark_fighter_chick on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 11:11:41 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Holding on to nothing more
Your love has left me cold and sour.
Screaming for one last night
Not going down without a fight
Holding me close, tears in your eyes
Tomorrow is our last good-byes
Lost in your words, Caught in your name
I can never feel the same.
You said the words, and grabed my hand
Lifted me up and made me stand
I think of you, and i fall apart
I love you with all my heart
Can't you hear my heart screaming your name
Without your love, i'm not the same
Without your voice, i die inside
No longer your arm is where i can hide
Fearing the morning when u will be gone
Fearing the the words so long
One last kiss, and then I'll leave
We'll meet again, is what I believe
But believe in something that won't come true
I promice my heart, I'll forever love you.

Copyright © dark_fighter_chick ... [ 2005-08-13 23:11:41]
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Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 11:53:51 PM AEST
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Tender loving words.

*****Screaming for one last night
Not going down without a fight

Then in that case, I sure pray you have a number.. phone, email addy..

I can't bear in my heart to even think that this love does not meet its highest potential. If by chance not with him.. with someone.. because.. youre heart is so dear. This I can tell by your write.

Is my heart wrong?

RLPoetress ; ))

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 11:56:41 PM AEST
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Wow, this was a great poem...I can so relate. My bf just left for Iraq...I hope you and your love can at least keep in touch. It sux so much when the ones you love must leave. Good luck...great write...Tanya

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 12:56:08 AM AEST
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So sad but beutifully written. One can feel the emotions in this write.
Good work.
huggs,
emy

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 07:38:45 PM AEST
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nearly all of the great poets and artists were mad .. for some reason .. sanity does not bring out great art or great poetry .. LOL

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