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It is very simple
And easy to get.
So just let me have it
And everything will be fine.
Please don’t say anything
Just take this kiss
And let me go.
For I can no longer
See the light of day.
All around me is dark
And has always been.
What are you doing?
Crying??
Why? For me?
Please don’t.
You don’t want me gone
Silly little girl
I can’t mean that much
What? I didn’t hear.
You love me!!!
How long?
Really that long?
I was so lost
In my self to see that
But now I do
Ouch. The Light
It hurts my eyes.
The Glorious pain
of you love
and the light it bring.
I love you now and forever
Silly little girl.
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Silly Little Girl

Contributed by dalamar on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 07:00:33 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

This is all I want
It is very simple
And easy to get.
So just let me have it
And everything will be fine.
Please don’t say anything
Just take this kiss
And let me go.
For I can no longer
See the light of day.
All around me is dark
And has always been.
What are you doing?
Crying??
Why? For me?
Please don’t.
You don’t want me gone
Silly little girl
I can’t mean that much
What? I didn’t hear.
You love me!!!
How long?
Really that long?
I was so lost
In my self to see that
But now I do
Ouch. The Light
It hurts my eyes.
The Glorious pain
of you love
and the light it bring.
I love you now and forever
Silly little girl.

Copyright © dalamar ... [ 2005-08-13 19:00:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Silly Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Ineedanap on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 02:02:06 AM AEST
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Different, yet i liked it. Good write :-)

Re: Silly Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 09:46:38 PM AEST
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interesting... interesting, but good. i liked this one... and it sounds like she helped you out of the darkness.... thank her for me. good write, keep it up.

~sprints

Re: Silly Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:38:47 PM AEST
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I think it's sweet. I also think your too hard on yourself. Glad you found this gal, maybe she'll help you through the darker days. Peace to you. Laura

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