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She came out of the dark
into the light
A raving beauty
what a magnificent sight

So many wasted years
alone, there in the dark
Now enjoying her life
as happy as a lark

A good lesson to be learned
for all of those in need
Living in the dark
you will never ever succeed

Please heed this lady
and herlesson well learned
For all those in the dark
live the life that you yearned

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The Lady In The Dark2

Contributed by Bruce on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 06:46:16 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



The Lady In The Dark 2

She came out of the dark
into the light
A raving beauty
what a magnificent sight

So many wasted years
alone, there in the dark
Now enjoying her life
as happy as a lark

A good lesson to be learned
for all of those in need
Living in the dark
you will never ever succeed

Please heed this lady
and herlesson well learned
For all those in the dark
live the life that you yearned





Copyright © Bruce ... [ 2005-08-13 06:46:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: The Lady In The Dark2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Randyjohnson on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 07:37:13 AM AEST
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This is the only poem I've seen that's a sequel. Great poem. Well written.


Re: The Lady In The Dark2 (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard2 on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 09:53:30 AM AEST
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Good Poem Bruce it gives some very good advice. Top marks from bernard2


Re: The Lady In The Dark2 (User Rating: 1 )
by wikedladi on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 02:35:58 PM AEST
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Great way to extend on the poem! Good Work!
: )


Re: The Lady In The Dark2 (User Rating: 1 )
by paul_x_walker on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 07:20:07 PM AEST
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awesome again


Re: The Lady In The Dark2 (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 11:14:27 PM AEST
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Beautiful words. Beautiful lady.

Rita


Re: The Lady In The Dark2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Stew on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 01:42:50 PM AEST
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i didn't comment on the first one because i thought: why not just kill two birds with one stone? I loved them! they were just so expressive i think the word is, but anyway I loved it!

stew XXOO


Re: The Lady In The Dark2 (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 04:38:32 PM AEST
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as every beautiful woman should come from the dark......... a dreamy write Bruce

Michelle


Re: The Lady In The Dark2 (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 06:42:43 AM AEST
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Like Stew, I just wanted to comment after I read the second one. (lack of time and all that) The message is such a wonderful one and I hope the person it was intended for gets it. I'm sure they will. You are a wiz with words and paint a very vivid picture. Kudos and Bravo!
Peace to ya
Thumps ;o)




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