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Array ( [sid] => 103381 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost love [time] => 2005-08-13 03:10:48 [hometext] => its a poem a wrote a couple of months ago please comment. [bodytext] => Where is my love?
My love is lost
buried deep in the depths of time.
Covered up in dust and grime
how can i find this love of mine
years and years go by and by.
I just hope she comes before i die.

Where is my love
this love of mine
love lost in the depths of time
covered up in rust and slime
How long must pray and wait
before i meet this awesome fate
will i live to tell the day.
or will i die in endless pain [comments] => 6 [counter] => 238 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Thedreamer777 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Lost love

Contributed by Thedreamer777 on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 03:10:48 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Where is my love?
My love is lost
buried deep in the depths of time.
Covered up in dust and grime
how can i find this love of mine
years and years go by and by.
I just hope she comes before i die.

Where is my love
this love of mine
love lost in the depths of time
covered up in rust and slime
How long must pray and wait
before i meet this awesome fate
will i live to tell the day.
or will i die in endless pain

Copyright © Thedreamer777 ... [ 2005-08-13 03:10:48]
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Re: Lost love (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 08:56:00 AM AEST
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your anguish was really felt!!

Emotive piece....I hope your heart does find the love it desires dear poet...

Re: Lost love (User Rating: 1 )
by Sahara on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 03:55:43 PM AEST
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Good write, very emotional. Loved the word play.

Re: Lost love (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 07:45:33 PM AEST
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Wow...awesome write!! Loved the flow. Hope your love comes back. Tanya

Re: Lost love (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 08:41:11 PM AEST
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hi welcome to YPDC. You write very similar to a girl I know on this site, her name is Brittany. She never capitalizes her i's. Oh well, probably just a strange coincidence.

Re: Lost love (User Rating: 1 )
by blackholesun on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 08:43:43 AM AEST
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this means so much to me...
i am not lost to you,i am here ,your not going to die in pain,if this is who i think it is,i love you with all my heart sweet romeo,and soon we will be together again like we were when god made us soulmates in heaven .i love you with all my heart.

Re: Lost love (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 12:15:18 PM AEST
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Be careful dreamer boy, blackholesun, has a lover in Texarkana, she's still calling Peter, she has James and Bart. Your on the list though brother, hey you lucky dog, NOT !!!Love to her is someone with money that will take care of her. She's a mooch. Least she's mooching off others and not Peter and the rest of her road family. Man your going to need lots of balls to keep up with this liar. Good luck.

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