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Array ( [sid] => 10333 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Do you remember? [time] => 2003-01-13 21:00:00 [hometext] => This poem is about previous moments of happiness with my lover, i basically ask the question "Do you remember?" [bodytext] => Remember the first time when we first had a kiss?,
Remember the feeling? To me it was bliss.
Remember the chemistry that reacted so strong?,
Remember the days when nothing went wrong?.

Remember the mornings we'd wake up in eachothers arms?,
remember the nights i'd feel you with charms?.
Remember the day i first said i loved you and the smile that stained my face,
remember the day that you left me? left me without a trace.

Remember the day you hurt me? i bet you remember my reaction so clear,
remember the days we were happy? you know, when we used to laugh and cheer.
I remember your eyes so deeply, i remember those lips so soft,
but i also remember the day when i realised all that we had was lost.

Remember when you lied to me? and left me in superior pain?
Don't you remember when i told you that my love was real and not a game?.
Now all's left are memories, of a best forgotten past,
do you wanna know what the sick thing is? i REALLY thought we'd last.

"Do you remember?" James McMorn [comments] => 3 [counter] => 264 [topic] => 24 [informant] => James_McMorn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
Do you remember?

Contributed by James_McMorn on Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



Remember the first time when we first had a kiss?,
Remember the feeling? To me it was bliss.
Remember the chemistry that reacted so strong?,
Remember the days when nothing went wrong?.

Remember the mornings we'd wake up in eachothers arms?,
remember the nights i'd feel you with charms?.
Remember the day i first said i loved you and the smile that stained my face,
remember the day that you left me? left me without a trace.

Remember the day you hurt me? i bet you remember my reaction so clear,
remember the days we were happy? you know, when we used to laugh and cheer.
I remember your eyes so deeply, i remember those lips so soft,
but i also remember the day when i realised all that we had was lost.

Remember when you lied to me? and left me in superior pain?
Don't you remember when i told you that my love was real and not a game?.
Now all's left are memories, of a best forgotten past,
do you wanna know what the sick thing is? i REALLY thought we'd last.

"Do you remember?" James McMorn




Copyright © James_McMorn ... [ 2003-01-13 21:00:00]
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Re: Do you remember? (User Rating: 1 )
by Suzy on Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 10:07:22 PM AEST
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That's really sad...I once thought that me and someone would last too...sigh sometimes the world can be cruel but love can be even crueler...thanks for sharing


Lasca


Re: Do you remember? (User Rating: 1 )
by James_McMorn on Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 11:06:09 AM AEST
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whos this lover then james...... ;)??????
love puffa fish


Re: Do you remember? (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 11:08:04 AM AEST
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That is a really good poem. Sorry that you had to experience the pain this person gave you




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