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Array ( [sid] => 103314 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The sparkle has dimmed but not yet died... [time] => 2005-08-12 03:14:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I found you
Wondering alone in the dark
The sparkle in your eyes has dimmed
So unsure of youself.
Stop Doubting!

Grab hold of yourself before you're all but lost
I long for that sparkle
Plz come back to me
I've searched for so long
Why will you give up now?

How could you show me what i want and then take it away?
Drowned me in a cloud of lust.
Take my form and bend me
Show me warmth i so long to have

You and i share the same fate
Caught up in a current we cannot escape

Yet to look in your eyes i feel safe once more
For our love is eternal
You are the one i adore [comments] => 4 [counter] => 245 [topic] => 2 [informant] => wikedladi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

The sparkle has dimmed but not yet died...

Contributed by wikedladi on Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 03:14:56 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I found you
Wondering alone in the dark
The sparkle in your eyes has dimmed
So unsure of youself.
Stop Doubting!

Grab hold of yourself before you're all but lost
I long for that sparkle
Plz come back to me
I've searched for so long
Why will you give up now?

How could you show me what i want and then take it away?
Drowned me in a cloud of lust.
Take my form and bend me
Show me warmth i so long to have

You and i share the same fate
Caught up in a current we cannot escape

Yet to look in your eyes i feel safe once more
For our love is eternal
You are the one i adore

Copyright © wikedladi ... [ 2005-08-12 03:14:56]
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Re: The sparkle has dimmed but not yet died... (User Rating: 1 )
by MDodgen on Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:57:19 PM AEST
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well written, crystal images. good job.

Re: The sparkle has dimmed but not yet died... (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 03:14:38 PM AEST
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beautiful... sad and heartfelt write, someone is lucky to be loved... make sure they know.

Re: The sparkle has dimmed but not yet died... (User Rating: 1 )
by robertdavidson on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 07:00:01 AM AEST
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This tribute to love is beautiful. I like it.

Robert Davidson.

Re: The sparkle has dimmed but not yet died... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 10:23:45 AM AEST
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I know how you feel better luck for you then i had hope he knows how lucky he is.

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