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There she sat in the dark
no stars, no moon, in the sky
The sounds of a train, in her mind
silently passed her by

The shadows of the trees
were in her mind as well
All these things of darkness
have cast an evil spell

It is time for her to awaken
and see the light of day
Move on to the brighter side
for this she must find her way

Life will be rewarding
and enjoyment she will find
Time to move out of the darkness
and totally unwind

The Lady In the Dark
will become the lady in the light
The moon and stars, will be there
as she enjoys each night [comments] => 8 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Bruce [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

The Lady In The Dark

Contributed by Bruce on Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 03:06:03 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The Lady In The Dark

There she sat in the dark
no stars, no moon, in the sky
The sounds of a train, in her mind
silently passed her by

The shadows of the trees
were in her mind as well
All these things of darkness
have cast an evil spell

It is time for her to awaken
and see the light of day
Move on to the brighter side
for this she must find her way

Life will be rewarding
and enjoyment she will find
Time to move out of the darkness
and totally unwind

The Lady In the Dark
will become the lady in the light
The moon and stars, will be there
as she enjoys each night

Copyright © Bruce ... [ 2005-08-12 03:06:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Lady In The Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by wikedladi on Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 03:07:49 AM AEST
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Lovely poem.. nice way to bring her into the light!

Re: The Lady In The Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by gwenevere on Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 03:29:11 AM AEST
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Out of darkness into light, a beautiful thought.another superb poem Bruce, Ros

Re: The Lady In The Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard2 on Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 04:17:03 AM AEST
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A positive piece well written full of optimism top marks from bernard2

Re: The Lady In The Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 12:50:37 PM AEST
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Smiling. And tonight, RD goes back out into those dark skies to sit, to unwind over and over again.

Tonight, RD will watch the light show in the sky. The show you have created for her.

Bruce, you are amazing. You make the night so light.

RD must sit and dissolve the days happenings and yes the spent time in the dark to move on.

And when she wakes up all refreshed she goes about her business, until the darkness comes to bring on another new day.

I love it, story of all her nights.

What does RD do when it rains outside?

She gets wet.

RLPoetess ; ))

Re: The Lady In The Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:16:43 PM AEST
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A lovely poem for a lovely lady. Yes, she needs much light in her life. God is working and all will be well.

Rita

Re: The Lady In The Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by AshRayne on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 04:27:42 PM AEST
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it seems the lady found the light to her darkness. perhaps this is a sign of hope. perhaps the light truly does exist.
wonderful poem, hope to see more.

exquisite writing that is your gift, be blessed, for you are perfection

~Ash

Re: The Lady In The Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by paul_x_walker on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 07:19:22 PM AEST
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awesome

Re: The Lady In The Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 04:39:43 PM AEST
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Ill remeber this poem when Im having a down day its so uplifting and encouraging
Michelle

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