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Array ( [sid] => 1033 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pull The Trigger [time] => 2002-07-24 06:20:48 [hometext] => This is my pain I live with every day, So I write in hopes I can stop the rain.
The Phantom [bodytext] => As I sit here and think of time gone by,
I wonder and ask my self why,
Why are you gone,
What did I do wrong,

My eyes fill up with tears,
Why aren't you here,
Where did you go,
Us being apart this can't be so,

I pull the pistol from the drawer,
Put it to my head and ask the Lord,
If I pull this trigger will I die,
Or am I just sitting here living a lie,

I look in the mirror and begain to shake,
I can really see my heart break,
I want to end all my pain,
A knife or gun it's all the same,

I'm tried of this game,
That excuse, Were better off friends, is lame,
What is the real reason you left me,
Let me pull the trigger and we'll see......

Forever Faithful
The Phantom [comments] => 2 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 22 [informant] => The_Phantom [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 29 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Pull The Trigger

Contributed by The_Phantom on Wednesday, 24th July 2002 @ 06:20:48 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

As I sit here and think of time gone by,
I wonder and ask my self why,
Why are you gone,
What did I do wrong,

My eyes fill up with tears,
Why aren't you here,
Where did you go,
Us being apart this can't be so,

I pull the pistol from the drawer,
Put it to my head and ask the Lord,
If I pull this trigger will I die,
Or am I just sitting here living a lie,

I look in the mirror and begain to shake,
I can really see my heart break,
I want to end all my pain,
A knife or gun it's all the same,

I'm tried of this game,
That excuse, Were better off friends, is lame,
What is the real reason you left me,
Let me pull the trigger and we'll see......

Forever Faithful
The Phantom

Copyright Â© The_Phantom ... [ 2002-07-24 06:20:48]
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Re: Pull The Trigger (User Rating: 1 )
by PS_iloveyou on Wednesday, 24th July 2002 @ 09:24:06 AM AEST
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soooooo very very sad.But there is always a brighter tomorrow even when it doesnt seem there is going to be.

Re: Pull The Trigger (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 05:29:11 PM AEST
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I hope you don't still
feel this way, this is so sad
it brought tears to my eyes
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

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