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Array ( [sid] => 103277 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Just Look Beside You [time] => 2005-08-11 20:15:46 [hometext] => [bodytext] => So upset you are
But why?
To blind to see what you have
But why?
So much love you are given
Yet youre to blind to see
Its perfect for you
But youre over come by greed

Love sit and it waits
For you to come around
Now you've broken Loves heart
It lies still on the ground

So what for for you now?
Who's heart will replace
The emptiness inside
That now shows on ure face

This lesson you will learn
You should have cherrish Love
Instead of foolishly yern

For her you were the one
None other were placed above
So wake up and see
How things are truely meant to be

Tho i know, this is in vain
My words you will not heed
For you are surely to blind to see...

~That which you seek you already have!~
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 201 [topic] => 48 [informant] => wikedladi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Just Look Beside You

Contributed by wikedladi on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 08:15:46 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

So upset you are
But why?
To blind to see what you have
But why?
So much love you are given
Yet youre to blind to see
Its perfect for you
But youre over come by greed

Love sit and it waits
For you to come around
Now you've broken Loves heart
It lies still on the ground

So what for for you now?
Who's heart will replace
The emptiness inside
That now shows on ure face

This lesson you will learn
You should have cherrish Love
Instead of foolishly yern

For her you were the one
None other were placed above
So wake up and see
How things are truely meant to be

Tho i know, this is in vain
My words you will not heed
For you are surely to blind to see...

~That which you seek you already have!~

Copyright © wikedladi ... [ 2005-08-11 20:15:46]
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Re: Just Look Beside You (User Rating: 1 )
by MDodgen on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 08:22:02 PM AEST
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nice write, it says alot. good job.

Re: Just Look Beside You (User Rating: 1 )
by Oriana on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 08:30:37 PM AEST
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Exallent *gives you cookies* Proves people are blind to the most important things

Re: Just Look Beside You (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 08:44:23 PM AEST
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dont worry, I understand... i get it...

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