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The stars, The rain, The angel

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 03:59:31 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry







You are the star that falls when I need to make a wish
You are the wish I make when I see the star
Falling, streaming across the sky

You are the rain when all the flowers need nourishment
You are the a flower that is not yet in full bloom
You are ever so beautiful to me

You are the sun when my world needs the bright light
When you’re around there are no clouds in the sky
I feel no could only your warmth

You are my star you always show me the way
Out of the darkness and despair
Even when it’s by day

You are my wings you are why I can fly
Why I my heart soars so high
Where no bird has been

You are everything that makes me who I am today
You are everything I love with all that I can
With every thing that makes me a man

This is a second poem as a bonus
I love you all who read it hehe
And most of all the ones who
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Re: The stars, The rain, The angel (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 04:07:21 AM AEST
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im more fond of the second poem, its absolutely gorgeous! such a beautiful collection of words.... heartfelt. great job


Re: The stars, The rain, The angel (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 04:32:13 AM AEST
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So sweet and I'm sure deeply luved.
huggs,
emy


Re: The stars, The rain, The angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 05:52:06 AM AEST
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Both poems are cool. This reminds me of a song:


"You're everything I hoped for
You're everything I need
You are so bueatiful- to me"


Re: The stars, The rain, The angel (User Rating: 1 )
by chaos_01 on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 06:53:35 AM AEST
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hey hey
well that is really sweet i have never really met a guy that knows how to write poems and express his feelings deffinatly about his gurl!!! ummmm very good but it is very much like a song that i know very similar and the first poem is much like the second but anyway keep it up i love it hahah....

lub me


Re: The stars, The rain, The angel (User Rating: 1 )
by mom11159 on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 08:27:12 AM AEST
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I applaud you Bravo Bravo. Both poems so absolutely beautiful in every way so mush passion so filled with a romantics heart puts me in awe loved both and both are so very very perfect and exceptional writes
Cathy


Re: The stars, The rain, The angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 10:27:44 PM AEST
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awe, very sweet, a beautiful write,perfection has wraped its arms these, among other things, hehe.




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