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Array ( [sid] => 10322 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Question [time] => 2003-01-13 17:20:00 [hometext] => this is what i think to myself, every time i reach for the blade, practically every day of my life... [bodytext] => Do i push upon the razor,
do i laugh instead of cry?
do i wipe the blood off later,
do i live or die?

Do i wear the sleeveless shirt
and cringe when people stare?
Or should i wait till the blood spirts
before i start to care....

Do i stay alive for someone,
live from day to day?
blood stops pouring out of me
my wrists begin to pray.

I kill myself again, again,
i never fail to try,
as i exult in my deserved pain,
i always fail to die...

kill me please, until i find
the piece of happiness-God! be kind
enough to spill the goblet of my blood
and wait until the droplets flood
my eyes.....
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 247 [topic] => 36 [informant] => ashleigh4 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Question

Contributed by ashleigh4 on Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 05:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Do i push upon the razor,
do i laugh instead of cry?
do i wipe the blood off later,
do i live or die?

Do i wear the sleeveless shirt
and cringe when people stare?
Or should i wait till the blood spirts
before i start to care....

Do i stay alive for someone,
live from day to day?
blood stops pouring out of me
my wrists begin to pray.

I kill myself again, again,
i never fail to try,
as i exult in my deserved pain,
i always fail to die...

kill me please, until i find
the piece of happiness-God! be kind
enough to spill the goblet of my blood
and wait until the droplets flood
my eyes.....

Copyright © ashleigh4 ... [ 2003-01-13 17:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Question (User Rating: 1 )
by nightrider on Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 05:56:41 PM AEST
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wow... this is amazing, these questions are no strangers in my head... you wrote this really well...

Re: Question (User Rating: 1 )
by Delusions on Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 03:44:45 AM AEST
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I really like this one... keep it up!
~Delusions~

Re: Question (User Rating: 1 )
by sheigha on Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 01:43:04 PM AEST
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I REALLY liked this! i can definately relate! thanx for sharing

Re: Question (User Rating: 1 )
by Fiona on Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 12:27:15 AM AEST
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Wow...that is all I can say...
Absolutley amazing...
Lots of Luv, *Fiona*

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