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Array ( [sid] => 103145 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cruelty [time] => 2005-08-10 05:32:51 [hometext] => She hurt me so badly... Complete figurative language in the shape of a... well, see for yourself. [bodytext] =>

Could you ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Please tell
Me why it was ~ ~ ~ ~ You stole my poor
Pulsing heart from ~ ~ My battered chest and
Toyed with it like there~Was nothing wrong while
Staring at my face like it wasn't screwed up with
Pain with your's showing no recognition of my
Anguish as you played with my life but then
Stuck it back inside me while beaten and
Bruised and you continued life with no
Regrets not thinking back to that
Girl you left alone and in pain
But not before you waved
Your bloodied hands
Before me just to
Show that you
Don't really
Care how
Much I
Love
You

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Jane_Doe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Cruelty

Contributed by Jane_Doe on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 05:32:51 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Could you ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Please tell
Me why it was ~ ~ ~ ~ You stole my poor
Pulsing heart from ~ ~ My battered chest and
Toyed with it like there~Was nothing wrong while
Staring at my face like it wasn't screwed up with
Pain with your's showing no recognition of my
Anguish as you played with my life but then
Stuck it back inside me while beaten and
Bruised and you continued life with no
Regrets not thinking back to that
Girl you left alone and in pain
But not before you waved
Your bloodied hands
Before me just to
Show that you
Don't really
Care how
Much I
Love
You

Copyright © Jane_Doe ... [ 2005-08-10 05:32:51]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Cruelty (User Rating: 1 )
by colinbaker62 on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 06:15:46 AM AEST
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Jane this is wonderful, and the way you set it out on the web page is brilliant.

Colin

Re: Cruelty (User Rating: 1 )
by Vermilion on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 08:15:33 AM AEST
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I cried whilst reading this. To be fair, I was already in a weak mood, but this really pulled on my heartstrings. And the shape.. wow. Really great write.
Yours,
Vermilion. x

Re: Cruelty (User Rating: 1 )
by springchic1979 on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 09:10:18 AM AEST
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I loved the poem and its form. A wonderful and cleverly constructed piece!

Yvonne

Re: Cruelty (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 02:55:29 PM AEST
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Awesome poem, Jane. And the shape of the heart just made it that much more meaningful.

Smiles,
Rita

Re: Cruelty (User Rating: 1 )
by igba on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 05:55:37 AM AEST
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it is good,tho it lacked bite.
really suprising cos i know i love most of your poems cos they have bite.

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