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my mother always warned me, keep out of the wood,
well one day I thought, I have got to see,
I wasn't being naughty, only being me.

I really felt quite nervous,as I put one foot inside,
the trees were really dense, a whole new world to hide,
the wind was gently rustling, the leaves up in the trees,
I could hear birds singing,and buzzing of the bees,

I came into a clearing, and stood back agog,
There was a little fairy sitting on a log,
she looked at me and smiled,i've a wish for you she said
but the moment that she said it, I woke up in bed,

So I never got my wish, it made me want to scream,
my only chance of a fairys wish, and it was a bloody dream. [comments] => 9 [counter] => 248 [topic] => 7 [informant] => lillyjane [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => HumorPoetry )

A stolen wish,

Contributed by lillyjane on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 07:26:20 PM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

When I was a child, I normaly was quite good,
my mother always warned me, keep out of the wood,
well one day I thought, I have got to see,
I wasn't being naughty, only being me.

I really felt quite nervous,as I put one foot inside,
the trees were really dense, a whole new world to hide,
the wind was gently rustling, the leaves up in the trees,
I could hear birds singing,and buzzing of the bees,

I came into a clearing, and stood back agog,
There was a little fairy sitting on a log,
she looked at me and smiled,i've a wish for you she said
but the moment that she said it, I woke up in bed,

So I never got my wish, it made me want to scream,
my only chance of a fairys wish, and it was a bloody dream.

Copyright © lillyjane ... [ 2005-08-09 19:26:20]
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Re: A stolen wish, (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 07:38:52 PM AEST
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lol. i liked this a lot. I can totally relate to this. Great Humorous write. Christopher.

Re: A stolen wish, (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 09:12:54 PM AEST
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very poetic write made me smile thank you

Re: A stolen wish, (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 09:22:15 PM AEST
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i think i liked the upbeat tone of this the best. you had excellent rhyming going on also. your rhythm was amazing. well done on all counts.

Re: A stolen wish, (User Rating: 1 )
by jmpy84 on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 10:36:25 PM AEST
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a very enjoyable poem good job

Re: A stolen wish, (User Rating: 1 )
by mom11159 on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 10:38:02 PM AEST
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lol loved this so mystical and magical, your imagery so wonderful and your words so catptivating kept me in antisipation through out. loved this excellent poem
Cathy

Re: A stolen wish, (User Rating: 1 )
by colinbaker62 on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 05:45:46 AM AEST
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Lillyjane this is my type of poem through and through. I loved it.

Colin

Re: A stolen wish, (User Rating: 1 )
by Manda2 on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 03:40:13 PM AEST
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This is a brilliant little poem. You've got to keep this up Lillyjane, you can see how appreciated your poems are! Go for it!

Re: A stolen wish, (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 09:09:31 PM AEST
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If you can make someone laugh then you truly have a gift
You did that here and after a long tiring day I thank you for that !!!

Steve

Re: A stolen wish, (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 06:20:29 AM AEST
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Are you sure I didn't write this? lol
I love your style, sense of humour, and ability to rhyme....priceless.
I am enjoying reading your works!

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