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An unseen battle changing the tide.
Swords clash, wind quakes.
Razors slash, skin breaks.
Blood falls as rain pelts the earth.
Ready to die a last breath I take.
waiting to fly the jump is taken.
Still alive the earth is shaken.
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The Unseen Battle.

Contributed by corbin286 on Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 01:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Supressed feelings screaming inside.
An unseen battle changing the tide.
Swords clash, wind quakes.
Razors slash, skin breaks.
Blood falls as rain pelts the earth.
Ready to die a last breath I take.
waiting to fly the jump is taken.
Still alive the earth is shaken.

Copyright © corbin286 ... [ 2003-01-13 13:20:00]
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Re: The Unseen Battle. (User Rating: 1 )
by SmokinJoeEvil on Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 01:29:01 PM AEST
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Strong images of internal battle... though a bit of a death-wish-like undercurrent... nice poem!

Re: The Unseen Battle. (User Rating: 1 )
by aernby on Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 06:53:47 PM AEST
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good descriptio of a frightening state ===
remember, if you need helpou can get help

good write

aern+

Re: The Unseen Battle. (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 04:05:33 PM AEST
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i've read a lot of your poetry on here and i really love your style of writing - simple but with such a lot of depth and strength of emotion. i can relate to a lot of what you say - i hope you don't always feel like this...keep writing, Kate xxx

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