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Array ( [sid] => 103077 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Hate The Way..... [time] => 2005-08-09 14:29:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I hate the way you laugh,
And how you tie your shoes,
I hate the way that you don't care,
If you break the rules,
I hate the way you drive your car,
I hate it when you cry,
I hate it when you tease me,
Or when you gaze into the sky,
I hate the way you're always right,
I hate the clothes you wear,
I hate it when you're not around,
I hate it when you stare,
I hate it when you call,
I hate it when you don't,
I hate it when you're serious,
I hate it when you joke,
I hate the way you look at me,
I hate the way you cuss,
I hate it when you hold my hand,
I hate it when I must,
I hate it when you kiss me,
Even more when I kiss you back,
I hate it when we talk for hours,
I hate the words you might lack,
I hate the way you eat,
I hate it when you sleep,
I hate it when yo sneeze,
I hate the way you weep,
I hate it when you're sad,
I hate the way you smile,
I hate it when you're crazy,
I hate it when you're wild,
I hate the way you walk,
It's funny when you fall,
But the funniest is,
The way I don't hate you,
Not one little bit,
Not even at all. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 33 [informant] => Writting_Fever [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

I Hate The Way.....

Contributed by Writting_Fever on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 02:29:41 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

I hate the way you laugh,
And how you tie your shoes,
I hate the way that you don't care,
If you break the rules,
I hate the way you drive your car,
I hate it when you cry,
I hate it when you tease me,
Or when you gaze into the sky,
I hate the way you're always right,
I hate the clothes you wear,
I hate it when you're not around,
I hate it when you stare,
I hate it when you call,
I hate it when you don't,
I hate it when you're serious,
I hate it when you joke,
I hate the way you look at me,
I hate the way you cuss,
I hate it when you hold my hand,
I hate it when I must,
I hate it when you kiss me,
Even more when I kiss you back,
I hate it when we talk for hours,
I hate the words you might lack,
I hate the way you eat,
I hate it when you sleep,
I hate it when yo sneeze,
I hate the way you weep,
I hate it when you're sad,
I hate the way you smile,
I hate it when you're crazy,
I hate it when you're wild,
I hate the way you walk,
It's funny when you fall,
But the funniest is,
The way I don't hate you,
Not one little bit,
Not even at all.

Copyright © Writting_Fever ... [ 2005-08-09 14:29:41]
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Re: I Hate The Way..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 02:47:36 PM AEST
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Great poem, there are many, many, many people who feel the way you do.

Re: I Hate The Way..... (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 02:51:28 PM AEST
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good write. and i know many who feel like this. it's okay, but maybe your just in doubt-- just try to get to know her more-- okay? great write, though, keep up the good work!

~sprints

Re: I Hate The Way..... (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 02:55:01 PM AEST
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well it was a good write but it reminded me alot of the poem read at the end of the move 10 things I hate about you, good write though

Re: I Hate The Way..... (User Rating: 1 )
by smilez101 on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 03:22:57 PM AEST
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really great write

Re: I Hate The Way..... (User Rating: 1 )
by EricBRamey on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 03:35:25 PM AEST
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Hey how ya 'doin! I hate to criticize (no pun intended)...but this poem became very repetative with the use of "I hate" at the beginning of each sentence. Just an observation...no offense intended. I did like the overall meaning though...keep on writin'!!!...Eric

Re: I Hate The Way..... (User Rating: 1 )
by jmpy84 on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 10:47:21 PM AEST
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you are truely talented

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