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Array ( [sid] => 103064 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Two Can Play [time] => 2005-08-09 11:40:29 [hometext] => I always thought love to be similar in nature. Flowers tend to know love more than us. But what about the bees? Do they? [bodytext] => Bumble bee bumble bee
Come out and play
Put a smile on my face
Make the flowers giggle with glee
Make the grass blow in the breeze
Do the trick that makes you twirl
Make that person laugh and swirl
Laugh and dance in the summers heat
Smile and giggle as the sun leaves
Come again tomorrow please
And we'll make the flowers giggle with glee
But then tomorrow is school
And all I can do is die from lack of you
Dying from the loss of fun
We both fly together and dance in the sun
And that is the end of my life
I doubt anything else will be as nice
Hoping to end this lifeless love
You will never be like the dove
We will be likie bumble bees
And make the flowers giggle with glee
Who will fill this vacancy in my heart
Will you do the honors of taking it apart?
I know I'm just a dead soul now
But will you show me how
To make the flowers dance with glee
And to make the grass blow in the breeze?
But of course you can't
You're not alive. I shan't
Make my life unimportant
So I'll die along with my rant
Of love divine
And of time
And you readers can learn
That love is hard to earn
So I'll leave you be
And hope you'll be the bumble bee
That hops with the air
And flies through the hair
of the trees
May your love know no other breeze
Let love take you
And let happiness warm you
Amen.
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Two Can Play

Contributed by EmoDCgirl36 on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 11:40:29 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Bumble bee bumble bee
Come out and play
Put a smile on my face
Make the flowers giggle with glee
Make the grass blow in the breeze
Do the trick that makes you twirl
Make that person laugh and swirl
Laugh and dance in the summers heat
Smile and giggle as the sun leaves
Come again tomorrow please
And we'll make the flowers giggle with glee
But then tomorrow is school
And all I can do is die from lack of you
Dying from the loss of fun
We both fly together and dance in the sun
And that is the end of my life
I doubt anything else will be as nice
Hoping to end this lifeless love
You will never be like the dove
We will be likie bumble bees
And make the flowers giggle with glee
Who will fill this vacancy in my heart
Will you do the honors of taking it apart?
I know I'm just a dead soul now
But will you show me how
To make the flowers dance with glee
And to make the grass blow in the breeze?
But of course you can't
You're not alive. I shan't
Make my life unimportant
So I'll die along with my rant
Of love divine
And of time
And you readers can learn
That love is hard to earn
So I'll leave you be
And hope you'll be the bumble bee
That hops with the air
And flies through the hair
of the trees
May your love know no other breeze
Let love take you
And let happiness warm you
Amen.




Copyright © EmoDCgirl36 ... [ 2005-08-09 11:40:29]
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Re: Two Can Play (User Rating: 1 )
by mom11159 on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 12:12:39 PM AEST
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loved this poem so wonderfully written your words so captivating your imagery so wonderful allowing a clear picture as I read
love is very much like nature both beautiful if tended to so breathtaking to have and see you become one with both if your heart belongs to both as mine does
Excellent write
Cathy


Re: Two Can Play (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 01:38:54 PM AEST
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neat .. really great.


Re: Two Can Play (User Rating: 1 )
by cocobeware on Friday, 4th August 2006 @ 07:39:55 AM AEST
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I love your expressions of this poem good work!




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