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Array ( [sid] => 103055 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Abyss of Mystery [time] => 2005-08-09 03:25:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Troubled anxiety and uncertain eventuality,
Blind only to that which is ahead
A shadowy consciousness meanders
Through fields of unceremonious untruths
But not lies

This cart-wheeling stone, teetering
On the borders of insanity
Guided only by a red flag,
Flapping in winds of change

This barren rock-wall of careless enigma
Battered by rains of conviction
And dwarfed only by ruins
Of statues once great and stories once told

The grey darkness is a comfort to me, though
Like hopeful, pointless morality
I prepare only for that which i can,
But most of everything is unknown

In this cauldron of comforting calamity
This abyss of mystery [comments] => 3 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 43 [informant] => trixxx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Abyss of Mystery

Contributed by trixxx on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 03:25:56 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Troubled anxiety and uncertain eventuality,
Blind only to that which is ahead
A shadowy consciousness meanders
Through fields of unceremonious untruths
But not lies

This cart-wheeling stone, teetering
On the borders of insanity
Guided only by a red flag,
Flapping in winds of change

This barren rock-wall of careless enigma
Battered by rains of conviction
And dwarfed only by ruins
Of statues once great and stories once told

The grey darkness is a comfort to me, though
Like hopeful, pointless morality
I prepare only for that which i can,
But most of everything is unknown

In this cauldron of comforting calamity
This abyss of mystery

Copyright © trixxx ... [ 2005-08-09 03:25:56]
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Re: Abyss of Mystery (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 03:38:30 AM AEST
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A very unique write.
Great job.
huggs,
emy

Re: Abyss of Mystery (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 11:18:27 AM AEST
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well, in its beauty I am lost; meandering .. a dimwit to words.

Re: Abyss of Mystery (User Rating: 1 )
by XxNights_ChildxX on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 12:05:14 PM AEST
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man this poems deep! i love the way u used all of the big words, it gives ur poem a higher meaning or respect if u will.. anyways great write!!

Jenni xxoo

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