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do you even know I'm here?
Even if my eyes did not seek you,
I'd feel your heat and strength.
Fear so thick it fills the air
Do they notice or even care,
I act oblivious but are you fooled?

Do I haunt your dreams,
Do you wake with guilt and look at her?
It can't be just me.
A dream is the truth awake you can't see.
While the years have lessened the frequency,
the intensity is breathtaking.

I wonder if we are meant to be, but
at a different time and in a new place.
Did our souls once live and love,
or are they meant to? [comments] => 7 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 48 [informant] => anitajames [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Unbridled Lust

Contributed by anitajames on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 12:01:59 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I see you walk into the room
do you even know I'm here?
Even if my eyes did not seek you,
I'd feel your heat and strength.
Fear so thick it fills the air
Do they notice or even care,
I act oblivious but are you fooled?

Do I haunt your dreams,
Do you wake with guilt and look at her?
It can't be just me.
A dream is the truth awake you can't see.
While the years have lessened the frequency,
the intensity is breathtaking.

I wonder if we are meant to be, but
at a different time and in a new place.
Did our souls once live and love,
or are they meant to?

Copyright © anitajames ... [ 2005-08-09 00:01:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Unbridled Lust (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 12:24:16 AM AEST
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That is an intriquing view on "lust" I don't quite think of lust like that. You put a good light on what I think is a bad word. Great write.

Re: Unbridled Lust (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 12:27:10 AM AEST
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this was nothing like I expected by the title but I like the mystery in it and I loved the surprise
Michelle

Re: Unbridled Lust (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 12:41:33 AM AEST
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In my mind when I see the word lust, it's sister is adultery because that was the combination in my marriage. How can one love one person supposedly and lust after another? I let him free to lust and as usual it ended up to be nothing, but then so did our marriage.

Smiles,
Rita

Re: Unbridled Lust (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 01:50:57 AM AEST
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Just I enjoyed the read..go on..venkat

Re: Unbridled Lust (User Rating: 1 )
by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 11:39:50 AM AEST
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Another lovely write,

Loved the end line: Did our souls once live and love, or are they meant to?

Everything in our life is there for a reason and so are the people you meet in your entire life, they are there for a purpose yet unknown.

Well done.

Nats.

Re: Unbridled Lust (User Rating: 1 )
by Oriana on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 11:12:31 PM AEST
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Very good! ^____^ "A dream is the truth awake you can't see" That's very true. People pay more attetion to your dreams!!! lol Anyway,...I love this poem...Keep writing *gives cookies*

Re: Unbridled Lust (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 05:55:30 AM AEST
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Too many thought... interesting, though, and well written.
Take care.
David

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