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Array ( [sid] => 103014 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my dream cant come true [time] => 2005-08-08 19:11:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>
crying tear drops in the night
wanting you to hold me
press me close to you
and tell me
everything
will be alright
but, the tears just well up
in my eyes
and im forced to realize
you’ll never hold me close
you live on another coasr
this lonliness that i feel
the heart ache is all to real
living on another coast
forbids the one thing
i want the most
the thing that could make
my dreams come true-
being held~ in the arms of you
being held for just one night
and having you say~ it’ll be all right [comments] => 4 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 22 [informant] => silenceinthestorm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
my dream cant come true

Contributed by silenceinthestorm on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 07:11:29 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove




crying tear drops in the night
wanting you to hold me
press me close to you
and tell me
everything
will be alright
but, the tears just well up
in my eyes
and im forced to realize
you’ll never hold me close
you live on another coasr
this lonliness that i feel
the heart ache is all to real
living on another coast
forbids the one thing
i want the most
the thing that could make
my dreams come true-
being held~ in the arms of you
being held for just one night
and having you say~ it’ll be all right




Copyright © silenceinthestorm ... [ 2005-08-08 19:11:29]
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Re: my dream cant come true (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 07:18:58 PM AEST
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This is a great poem. The haunting separation of love. Great write


Re: my dream cant come true (User Rating: 1 )
by poet_of_anger on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 08:06:15 PM AEST
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very good, i liked how this flowed and drew me into your words


Re: my dream cant come true (User Rating: 1 )
by RPFARGONE on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 09:17:02 PM AEST
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GREAT WRITE I COULD FEEL YOUR LOVE


Re: my dream cant come true (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 06:42:01 AM AEST
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awww very sad and yet beautiful in how you love this person




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