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Array ( [sid] => 103003 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Find Me Loving Heart [time] => 2005-08-08 16:29:23 [hometext] => The innerself explained....kinda.... [bodytext] => Left alone here in this prison
Of absolute solitare
A place I call home,
The cave in which I hide
The inner person of me
That awaits to be released

There is more to me
Than meets the eye,
Underneath the skin
Hidden well deep inside
Things you cannot see

Still waters, deep as the ocean
Overflown with desires and wishes,
A creative mind lost in a labyrinth
Of dreams and impossible things

God's creature misunderstood
Me mind, confused and dazed
Lost in a land of make believe

All I wanted, was to be loved
I reach out a hand, in hope,

You'll find me loving heart....

~~ Nats ~~ [comments] => 7 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 14 [informant] => xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Find Me Loving Heart

Contributed by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 04:29:23 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Left alone here in this prison
Of absolute solitare
A place I call home,
The cave in which I hide
The inner person of me
That awaits to be released

There is more to me
Than meets the eye,
Underneath the skin
Hidden well deep inside
Things you cannot see

Still waters, deep as the ocean
Overflown with desires and wishes,
A creative mind lost in a labyrinth
Of dreams and impossible things

God's creature misunderstood
Me mind, confused and dazed
Lost in a land of make believe

All I wanted, was to be loved
I reach out a hand, in hope,

You'll find me loving heart....

~~ Nats ~~

Copyright © xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx ... [ 2005-08-08 16:29:23]
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Re: Find Me Loving Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 04:50:45 PM AEST
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not bad on this one.
I have never read any of your stuff but am glad now that i did.
well done.

Re: Find Me Loving Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 05:26:07 PM AEST
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This is a write of a very high standard in my humble opinion!- great lines like 'Still waters, deep as the ocean
Overflown with desires and wishes,' lovely imagery at work here. well done a lovely poem with so great ideas

feel free to comment on my work also at: http://www.your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=Your_Account&op=userinfo&username=overstated

Re: Find Me Loving Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by solosoul on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 06:45:54 PM AEST
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interesting nice work

Re: Find Me Loving Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by rosethorn100 on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 10:51:44 PM AEST
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a lovely peom again - i think i will quit soon lol
i hope someday for u that this person will find his way to ur loving heart too.
i wish it for both of u

hugggggggggggggs

Rosey

Re: Find Me Loving Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 08:40:20 PM AEST
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Of course you want to be loved, but somehow you are scared to be loved.It takes time for anyone to know the real you, if you are willing to open up.You WILL find that person you can truly give your whole self too........he is out there !!

Steve
x

Re: Find Me Loving Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Darkhorse71 on Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 04:46:11 PM AEST
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Nats, I don't know how you got into my head like that but I'm impressed. Incredible perception and writing skills.
Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
john

Re: Find Me Loving Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 12:00:34 AM AEST
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You know, the more & more I read your poems, the more they seem to talk to me. You are an awesome writer and bring the feelings and emotions in your poems to life. That is an awesome gift of talent you have. I felt as though you reached into my soul with the beauty of this write. I know this probably sounds corny but it was like almost witnessing a miracle. That's how alive this poem came to me. Impressive! Brilliance which exceed the best.

Thank you very much,

Tim
:)

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