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Array ( [sid] => 102965 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Daddy [time] => 2005-08-08 01:29:14 [hometext] => i wrote this a few years ago about my biological father....i havent seen him in almost 8years and i have only talked to him abou0t 5 times since then to hes doing really good now though im soo proud of him but im still hurt from the past. i hope u enjoy!~ [bodytext] => Daddy why did you go,
it hurt us all, don't you know?
Daddy it was just too much,
I guess for you it wasn't enough.
Daddy why'd you have to be this way?
Will you ever come back someday?
Daddy did you have fun hitting me,
I guess it's just the way God wanted it to be.
Daddy why are you like this,
are you something I should miss?
Daddy don't you know that bruises fade?
but the pain will always stay.
Daddy should I forgive you,
that's something I don't think I could do.
Daddy you broke us all apart,
you broke all of our hearts.
Daddy you hit us yea, but why?
it seems every night I sit down and cry!
Daddy I sometimes think to take these pills,
don't you know that depression kills.
Daddy I know you don't care,
Why do you have to be so unfair?
Daddy I know you probably won't come back,
and I know this for a fact.
Daddy why'd you cause me all this pain?
all I have is the life that still remains.
Daddy don't worry I'll make sure its not long,
please just listen to my song!
Daddy I'm just gonna be gone,
and hope this pain will be undone.
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Daddy

Contributed by xthrewmyluvawayx on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 01:29:14 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems



Daddy why did you go,
it hurt us all, don't you know?
Daddy it was just too much,
I guess for you it wasn't enough.
Daddy why'd you have to be this way?
Will you ever come back someday?
Daddy did you have fun hitting me,
I guess it's just the way God wanted it to be.
Daddy why are you like this,
are you something I should miss?
Daddy don't you know that bruises fade?
but the pain will always stay.
Daddy should I forgive you,
that's something I don't think I could do.
Daddy you broke us all apart,
you broke all of our hearts.
Daddy you hit us yea, but why?
it seems every night I sit down and cry!
Daddy I sometimes think to take these pills,
don't you know that depression kills.
Daddy I know you don't care,
Why do you have to be so unfair?
Daddy I know you probably won't come back,
and I know this for a fact.
Daddy why'd you cause me all this pain?
all I have is the life that still remains.
Daddy don't worry I'll make sure its not long,
please just listen to my song!
Daddy I'm just gonna be gone,
and hope this pain will be undone.




Copyright © xthrewmyluvawayx ... [ 2005-08-08 01:29:14]
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Re: Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by LickaLolipop on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 01:40:19 AM AEST
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I can relate to that..
I liked it :)


Re: Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Ineedanap on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 01:54:12 AM AEST
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Wow. Nevr been abused by my dad but i have a past n i can still relate. It made me cry. Great poem. I'm glad he and you are doing better.

Brooke




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