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Array ( [sid] => 102929 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Why..... [time] => 2005-08-07 17:26:13 [hometext] => This recently happened to a friend of mine and I just want everyone to know that it's not worth it...... [bodytext] => Three in the morning,
Not a soul in site,
You're feeling like a black hell,
In the middle of the night,

Praying for a miricle,
Hoping she's alive,
Saying it should be me,
Who told her wrong from right,

I should be there with you,
Holding your young hand,
In the hospital room,
Try to take it like a man,

What made you want to do this,
To sneak out in the night,
Risking all your life's worth,
Then stab it with a knife,

They found you in ditch,
Covered in your blood,
The car was back away from you,
You flew out on the first "thud",

All we can do is pray,
Asking God to see us through,
Our lives would be so different,
If we had to loose you,

It's a leason you can learn,
As we sit here and cry,
But please, dear God, we're begging you,
We don't want to say good-bye.

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Why.....

Contributed by Writting_Fever on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 05:26:13 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Three in the morning,
Not a soul in site,
You're feeling like a black hell,
In the middle of the night,

Praying for a miricle,
Hoping she's alive,
Saying it should be me,
Who told her wrong from right,

I should be there with you,
Holding your young hand,
In the hospital room,
Try to take it like a man,

What made you want to do this,
To sneak out in the night,
Risking all your life's worth,
Then stab it with a knife,

They found you in ditch,
Covered in your blood,
The car was back away from you,
You flew out on the first "thud",

All we can do is pray,
Asking God to see us through,
Our lives would be so different,
If we had to loose you,

It's a leason you can learn,
As we sit here and cry,
But please, dear God, we're begging you,
We don't want to say good-bye.

Copyright © Writting_Fever ... [ 2005-08-07 17:26:13]
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Re: Why..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 05:29:48 PM AEST
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This is very good. I am a little too choked up to say more than that. Your poem shows that you have a great heart for you friend and those around you.

Re: Why..... (User Rating: 1 )
by paul_x_walker on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 06:32:06 PM AEST
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very interesting i like it
good job

Re: Why..... (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 10:36:41 PM AEST
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yes some people learn a lesson the hard way....your words were filled with truth....

a great write, i enjoyed reading it....

all my prayers for your friend.

Re: Why..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 10:40:37 PM AEST
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certainly isnt worth it. excellent transition. your second stanza stood out to me the most.

Re: Why..... (User Rating: 1 )
by twisted_dreams on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 11:23:29 PM AEST
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this poem is amazing.. i know how hard of a subject this is.. but to see how you wrote and expained it so well is amazing! im just so glad that she's ok! Keep up the good work! LYLAS
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