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Array ( [sid] => 102883 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Snowflake [time] => 2005-08-07 04:18:32 [hometext] => It's about being different from everyone else and you can probably relate. I hope it makes an ounce of sense cuz I'm not in the best state... [bodytext] => These wings are not symmetrical,
My patterns don't match up.
I'm at least a million different ways,
That won't simply correspond.
Each time I try to find my size,
It's either too big or small.
My puzzle pieces never fit,
But the picture still looks decent.

Your catagories won't accept,
Each person that I am.
But they can't allow your prejudice,
To muffle out their voices.
Every one of them is different,
Though as one they are complete.
And I love them all to pieces,
Because they are all pieces of me.

No one can get to know me,
And see my every side.
For if they ever were to,
They may not like what's there.
I'm not a perfect shape,
Not a square and not a circle.
But each dent that's seen is mine to love,
And your's to scrutinize.

And I know you're not as different,
As you pretend to be.
We may not share a love or hate,
My we hide a certain secret.
Inside of all our hardened shells,
There are Demons and there's Angels.
Each snowflake may not look the same,
But their beauty is still unearthly. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Jane_Doe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Snowflake

Contributed by Jane_Doe on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 04:18:32 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

These wings are not symmetrical,
My patterns don't match up.
I'm at least a million different ways,
That won't simply correspond.
Each time I try to find my size,
It's either too big or small.
My puzzle pieces never fit,
But the picture still looks decent.

Your catagories won't accept,
Each person that I am.
But they can't allow your prejudice,
To muffle out their voices.
Every one of them is different,
Though as one they are complete.
And I love them all to pieces,
Because they are all pieces of me.

No one can get to know me,
And see my every side.
For if they ever were to,
They may not like what's there.
I'm not a perfect shape,
Not a square and not a circle.
But each dent that's seen is mine to love,
And your's to scrutinize.

And I know you're not as different,
As you pretend to be.
We may not share a love or hate,
My we hide a certain secret.
Inside of all our hardened shells,
There are Demons and there's Angels.
Each snowflake may not look the same,
But their beauty is still unearthly.

Copyright © Jane_Doe ... [ 2005-08-07 04:18:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Snowflake (User Rating: 1 )
by gwenevere on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 05:58:10 AM AEST
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This is a very inspired write.Relating a snowflake to yourself.I really enjoyed this.A great start to my day, Thankyou, Ros

Re: Snowflake (User Rating: 1 )
by sojourner on Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 05:07:28 PM AEST
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very good piece, your very imaginitive
the title is a perfect fit for the poem,and yes it
does make sense,and to your words we can
all relate.
sojourner,
Are you a hopeless romantic?

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