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If you do, it's me you will never see
If you can help me throw my life away
You will never see me after today

If you'll just help me throw it down
You'll never again have to see my frown
Help me kill it now, give me a knife
Tell me to end this long-lasting strife

If you will just help me today
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Throw My Life Away

Contributed by sprinter27 on Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 10:02:18 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Come over here and help me
If you do, it's me you will never see
If you can help me throw my life away
You will never see me after today

If you'll just help me throw it down
You'll never again have to see my frown
Help me kill it now, give me a knife
Tell me to end this long-lasting strife

If you will just help me today
Just pick up my life and throw it away

Copyright © sprinter27 ... [ 2005-08-06 22:02:18]
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Re: Throw My Life Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 10:08:45 PM AEST
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I hope you are having a better day now that you poured out your heart.

Re: Throw My Life Away (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 10:15:59 PM AEST
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Sad but written well.
Hang tuff.
huggs,
emy

Re: Throw My Life Away (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 10:50:16 PM AEST
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hey good write, u really expressed the desperation to get out of here...keep goin

Re: Throw My Life Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Ineedanap on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 02:20:14 AM AEST
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Very powerful. Short yet emotional. Great write

Brooke

Re: Throw My Life Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Misunderstood_gurl on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 02:23:05 AM AEST
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awesome poem..i loved it...But I AM NOT GONNA HELP YOU THROW YOUR LIFE AWAY! I need you to be with me cause i dont wanna live in this black, cold world alone...i need someone who understands and is like me in a way, with me...so dont throw your life away...make something of it!

But still i loved this poem...just keep it up! ^ ^

Re: Throw My Life Away (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 04:40:46 PM AEST
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Very nice Sprints...good expression, and the rhymes flowed well. It's good to write through your emotions, it really does help. Keep it up!

Scorp.

Re: Throw My Life Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 02:59:17 PM AEST
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Short and... well, not so sweet. I hope you feel a bit better now, I always find that writing can relieve a small bit of that inner pain and frustration that everyone has locked inside of them. Great write, keep it up

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