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talked through
never to

i feel like a light
i burn out
and lose my life

i feel like broken glass
easy injuries
but i'm just trash

i feel like a ghost
never seen
not beleived by most

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feel

Contributed by xfaggotx on Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 06:22:28 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I feel like a phone
talked through
never to

i feel like a light
i burn out
and lose my life

i feel like broken glass
easy injuries
but i'm just trash

i feel like a ghost
never seen
not beleived by most

Copyright © xfaggotx ... [ 2005-08-06 06:22:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Zandria on Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 06:58:36 AM AEST
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Wow.
Very short & to the point.
Concise!
And, very applicable.
Good job!

Re: feel (User Rating: 1 )
by ScreenSaver77 on Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 08:14:57 AM AEST
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Very nice, clearly shows how you feel at the time of writing. Just have a look, you got a spelling typo to correct..

Best Wishes
H

Re: feel (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 11:35:39 AM AEST
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great write. i liked the raw emotion. keep up the good work.
-trini

Re: feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen54 on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 10:00:30 AM AEST
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WOW! nice poem. I can relate to this so much.
Great write and keep it up.

-Jennifer

If you could comment on my poem "this school year" it would mean a lot to me.

Re: feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Caged Soul on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 09:11:00 AM AEST
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One good thing about feeling like crap is that it give's so much things to write about. Loved the honesty and realness, as well as the symbolism.

Absolutely fab!
~souLBro~

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