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Array ( [sid] => 102732 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Spinning Top [time] => 2005-08-05 08:34:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Our world is a spinning top, spinning on its pin
Owned by a little child, jealous and malicious
Started off so very fast, but never going to win
Gravity so very strong, gravity so vicious

Pardon me for asking you, but why then are you here?
Why don't you just leave before we all fall down?
Are you waiting for a climax, or is it just a fear?
Don't jump in the water if you don't know how to drown

There are many ends to this dream, but none of them will meet
You'll spend your end beside yourself, repeating on the past
Choose to brave this irony, but choose to live it sweet
For end will come and fate be done, yours shall not be the last [comments] => 3 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 43 [informant] => trixxx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Spinning Top

Contributed by trixxx on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 08:34:53 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Our world is a spinning top, spinning on its pin
Owned by a little child, jealous and malicious
Started off so very fast, but never going to win
Gravity so very strong, gravity so vicious

Pardon me for asking you, but why then are you here?
Why don't you just leave before we all fall down?
Are you waiting for a climax, or is it just a fear?
Don't jump in the water if you don't know how to drown

There are many ends to this dream, but none of them will meet
You'll spend your end beside yourself, repeating on the past
Choose to brave this irony, but choose to live it sweet
For end will come and fate be done, yours shall not be the last

Copyright © trixxx ... [ 2005-08-05 08:34:53]
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Re: Spinning Top (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard2 on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:08:50 PM AEST
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The world is indeed a spinning top. My fear is that it will one day stop spinning. What then? good piece of poetry I like it bernard2

Re: Spinning Top (User Rating: 1 )
by MnMnMsrcool on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:10:48 PM AEST
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I don't think I've read a poem like this...I like it. Good job and keep writing!

Re: Spinning Top (User Rating: 1 )
by BEE on Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 09:00:15 AM AEST
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I love this poem!! its a top poem!

PS check out my poems and comment thanks

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