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[aid] => mick
[title] => my mind
[time] => 2005-08-04 23:51:46
[hometext] => short but i dont care
[bodytext] => my mind is not a good place to be. the voices would overwelm u.
i have trouble not listening to them.
u would go out of your mind if u tried to sort out whats in my mind.
they have marked me clinicly insane.
even the shrinks have lost their minds trying to sort out my mind.
so now im on my way to that white padded room that i like so much so bye bye folks
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my mind
Contributed by
hellsfallenangel
on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 11:51:46 PM in AEST
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my mind is not a good place to be. the voices would overwelm u.
i have trouble not listening to them.
u would go out of your mind if u tried to sort out whats in my mind.
they have marked me clinicly insane.
even the shrinks have lost their minds trying to sort out my mind.
so now im on my way to that white padded room that i like so much so bye bye folks
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Re: my mind
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 12:03:14 AM AEST
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| a mind is a terrible thing to waste, they tell me. so much can happen to a mind with just once cause. i have yet to find any credibility in the white padded rooms. as for the poem, excellent concept, but one that should never be true. |
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Re: my mind
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 12:34:21 AM AEST
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| Okie dokie. |
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Re: my mind
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by vibes2go on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 12:46:18 AM AEST
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| Ozzy said he used to hear corn flakes .. I don't know if he was pulling people's legs or not .. my son hears voices and they always told him to do things like take my car ... why can't voices ever tell him to do something like get a good job?? |
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Re: my mind
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by brokenwings on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:11:24 AM AEST
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| i think everyone hears the voice from time to time, its just a matter of figuring out which ones to listen to, good write |
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Re: my mind
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by Jane_Doe on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:34:26 AM AEST
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| Sometimes, I'll go through periods where everytime I think, my thoughts come out as screams inside my head and in voices that I know but aren't my own. We're all a bit crazy but I hope you don't feel too isolated. |
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Re: my mind
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by Zandria on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 08:28:40 AM AEST
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oh boy, your people should get together with my people. 'we' have a luncheon and tea each thursday...wait...... They'd LOVE to have you!
Seriously, I feel ya.
Great write-hit home. |
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Re: my mind
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by Giggles1989 on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 11:04:58 AM AEST
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| ur a dork....u dont have voices in ur head I should do....now Justin does, but thats only because he is a nasty scrub who cant get any....U DONT HAVE VOICES! and if u do then thats messed up since we went out and u never told me about them |
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Re: my mind
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by Baby_Grl on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 12:27:50 PM AEST
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Good write Demon. Keep writting I want to see more and its a good write here. Who cares wat other says about it your good. Everyone does have voice in their minds that they dont know about and some people dont like to talk about it. But even if this isnt about you its pretty kool you wrote this ok bro. love ya and good write.
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Re: my mind
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by Baby_Grl on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 12:28:30 PM AEST
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Good write Demon. Keep writting I want to see more and its a good write here. Who cares wat other says about it your good. Everyone does have voice in their minds that they dont know about and some people dont like to talk about it. But even if this isnt about you its pretty kool you wrote this ok bro. love ya and good write.
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Re: my mind
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 11:45:06 PM AEST
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| good. i have voices in my head also!!!!!! lol |
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Re: my mind
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by RebelRose on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 05:28:09 PM AEST
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| i really like this one too it sounds as if u write of truth not lies |
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Re: my mind
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by justme03 on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 11:02:24 AM AEST
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dude! i so can relate
the voices in my head are insane and i dont kno what to do about them!!!!!!!!!!
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