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Waves cascading, oceans roar
Shingle mixed with sand so fine
Scent of oysters, sparkling wine

If you listen hard and long
You will hear the mermaids song
Singing out to one and all
Listen! can you hear her call

Look out at this scene, so free
Where horizon meets the sea
See the haze, the clouds, the sun
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A Summers Day

Contributed by gwenevere on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 05:31:56 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

Walk along the sun drenched shore
Waves cascading, oceans roar
Shingle mixed with sand so fine
Scent of oysters, sparkling wine

If you listen hard and long
You will hear the mermaids song
Singing out to one and all
Listen! can you hear her call

Look out at this scene, so free
Where horizon meets the sea
See the haze, the clouds, the sun
Rest and watch, till day is done

Copyright © gwenevere ... [ 2005-08-04 17:31:56]
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Re: A Summers Day (User Rating: 1 )
by colinbaker62 on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 05:44:56 PM AEST
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Hi Gwenevere, this poem is very in touch with the oceanic aspect of nature, lovely.

What's more, you may not believe this but I have just watched the final hour of Camelot on video, and was listening to the soundtrack on the computer when I came across the pen name 'Gwenevere' on this forum.

Wierd or what ! I may have been King Arthur in a previous life. lol

Colin

Re: A Summers Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Erualaitalmarea on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 06:00:44 PM AEST
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that was really awesome...your screen name is legend maybe your poetry will be as well someday...good write :)

Re: A Summers Day (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 06:31:12 PM AEST
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this was lovely ..

Re: A Summers Day (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 07:27:20 PM AEST
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A lovely nature write. Your imagery was very very good. Having lived right on the beach at one time, I could visualize this so easily. The smell of the water that the waves carry in on the breeze, the gulls overhead and going out early each morning to see what gifts the tides had brought in. Splendid work.

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Re: A Summers Day (User Rating: 1 )
by mom11159 on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 11:35:47 PM AEST
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WOW this is beautiful and very breathtaking Your imagery allowed me a visual as I read so wonderful this poem is full of serenity loved every word
excellent job
Cathy

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